Chapter 1: So, i checked this story after reading mad dancer and fall for your writing and planning to check the other story after this..
This is nice and i wonder what happen next? Do they comunicate after this? Become a friend coz they have some connection of painful experince from the same person? Did kai make up for what he dis in the past? Seriously, anything that would happen after this would be nice and i am excited to know it
I trust you that you'll do a very good job at it (if you planned to make one) but if you dont its okay :) this story is already good enough

Chapter 1: It was nice, I would love to know more about their love story, but I am quite happy. The story is well written and while reading, atleast for me, I could feel her pain, great job!

Chapter 1: This short story is beautiful. It felt so real and touching, you did very well.

Great story and very touching, and it felt very real, thank you for sharing it but i can't help but wonder what will happen to them now, does Kiran's heart still have feelings for him, is jongin even capable of loving kiran and not just the gost of his ex (her heart), is it possible for them to find a way to eachother , i really hope they can, good job for this touching one shot ^.^

This is so beautiful!! I loved reading it so much.. I hadn't expected that would plan something like that at all.. It was a shock for me though I had gussed that Kiran's uneasiness had something to do with Area's heart and her love for Jongin.. And it was true!!!
But the end... It's really short (like kdramas).. Can't you add a sequel for this?? But It's really up to you.. I like it this way also.. ^^
And guess what?? I loved this story so much that I already added it to my recommendations thread.. So congrats on writing a great one shot... <333