MindBreak

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“It’s a mindbreak."

“What??”

“You need to enter his brain and save him.”

“Wait, say that again!?”

Hoseok has unknowingly gotten tangled up with the supernatural, and it’s up to the rest of the team to enter his mind and rescue him before he’s lost forever. But who’s going to save the others when this dream turns into a nightmare?

Foreword

Hi!!! This is my first fanfiction ever, so i'm a bit nervous. I might not update very often, so those of you wanting to read the rest, please be patient! And thank you to anyone who reads this, i'll honestly be happy with 5 people reading this. 

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V-HopeMin #1
Chapter 7: This is so CUTE!! :)
For_the_lolz #2
Chapter 7: Oof this was actually really cute, great job!!!!
ARMY_M #3
Chapter 5: What?! Why?! Oh YOONGI!
ARMY_M #4
Chapter 4: Ouch! Not gonna lie, that made my blood run cold.
ARMY_M #5
Chapter 3: Oooooooo I'm getting really dragged into this story, it is so interesting! I wish someone could make a movie on this, I'd watch it day and night!
KingBong #6
Chapter 6: This is a really good story so far :)
milkia #7
Chapter 3: it's hoseok!! :)) i'm glad the others found him.
something i wanted to mention, just a comment, was that as an author, i wouldn't add random a/n's in the middle of the chapter. you commented a couple times that you always start with the characters walking, and you could have just added that at the end a/n instead of breaking the flow, you know?

but just a suggestion.

great update! thank you :)
milkia #8
Chapter 1: hi! i'm always happy reading fellow author's stories, and this is a plot that immediately dragged me in. it breaks my heart to even read about hobi doubting himself :( the idea with the cookie was interesting! i love how much the other members are protective of him in the second chapter, and jungkook being scared is the cutest^^ taehyung looking for blackmail material :DD and the box of "loneliness"... i thought that he was afraid of the members, but it seems like he's afraid of LOSING the others. and his fans.

now, i know it's just a fic, but i'm always scared that hobi really feels this way. :((

thank you for posting this story :) and may i ask if you directly pasted this from google docs? usually when i do that the text ends up bolded and weirdly spaced, which looks similar in the formatting of the chapters here.

i'm excited for another update! <33 you have all of my support and love :)
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