Chapter 1: Its really hurt to see both them like that, but that is the best way for both of them...they should take what ever the consequence from their ways

Chapter 2: Wow! You really spun a tragic heart wrenching tale. I think the ending was pretty much perfect. Coz sometimes you can't take back your choices. Just like Tiffany can't take back her choice of choosing Taeyeon over Jessica. Tiffany dug her own grave, now she has to lay in it.
I really really liked how you made the characters so realistic. A part of me hated Tiffany for what she did, but a part of me also understood why she did. She was attracted to the fame that came with Taeyeon. And Tiffany was a aspiring kpop idol. I can't hate her for being ambitious. And neither can I hate Jessica for moving on from Tiffany. She chose what any sane human in real life chooses. They both got a closure. That's good. They deserved it.
You made me sympathise with your characters. And you also narrated the events in a slick way, easy to understand, blending in the real life events seamlessly in to your jeti world. Reading both the perspectives was a treat. Especially the perspective of Tiffany. The lyrics of the song also gave a beautiful haunting air to the whole story. Your last line - bring me back to the summer storms with you and I, was well placed and closed of the story neatly.
Real good read I must say! I enjoyed it, felt connected to it. It strummed my heartstrings.
Keep up the good work !!:):)

Chapter 2: next

Chapter 2: Yes she deserve it.but how bout taeyeon

Chapter 2: I know everyone else is dying for a happy ending and I mean they are great but I think it ended in an okay manner. (Or maybe I love angst too much lol) Because Jessica got her full goodbye closure and I mean I'm sure Tiffany feels better that Jessica doesn't truly hate her for what she's done, I'm sure she knows Jessica was hurt and all but she does have to pay the price for what she's done. I mean it's up to you on whether or not to give her a second chance (even though Jessica sort of gave it while hanging out with her throughout the day and doing stuff) but don't feel super pressured to make it happen! This story/multi-shot was a great read and written well! So many emotions were flowing through and I enjoyed it. The reality factor was a wonderful touch. Thanks for writing this :)

Chapter 2: I believe everybody deserves a second chance depending on the situation ofc. Here, I think Tiffany hurt Jess too much. And her punishment is regreting her decision that summer day. But the fact that she has to live with that regret for the rest of her life seems a bit too harsh of a punishment for her. If you're planning on making a sequel I think Tiffany should get a second chance. It's obvious that they still love each other even though they both have someone else now.

Chapter 1: Arrr sometimes it's feel good with this kind of story:) even its hurt but tiffany already lose jessica on that summerTT so the ending is acceptable...even its break jeTi heart...

Chapter 2: Yes,author please second changer for Tiffany

Chapter 2: yes she does! jeti jeti jeti!!