Midnight Adventures

Description

Jihoon is afraid of the dark and the monsters that may or may not be under his bed. Yoongi isn’t afraid of anything. So who does Jihoon go to when he needs help?

Foreword

Written for the Monthly MIni-August Contest in Fantastic Fantasy Writing Contest.

This story was the contest coordinator's first pick for the Mini-August Contest. Thank you!

The prompt I'm using here is: Heroes, though certainly not in the traditional sense. haha

I hope you enjoy regardless!

 

Excellent poster done by XoXoByunBaek at Jelly Bubble Graphic Shop. They do really good work and if you're in need of a poster, I would recommend them. ^_^

Another poster (by Eurine) was done by them that was also very good, but not the right feel for this one. I'm thnking about writing another oneshot just for it though, for them at a later age.

https://i.imgur.com/9sEeZRC.jpg

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kaseyslove
#1
Chapter 1: This was undeniably adorable the siblings were so cute in the last thing I would have thought of to do with this but it was just right.

Squishy Yoongi is what I live for some days and I mush admit I was so pleased at their relationship and the realisticness of the situation. Considering I was definitely Jihoon as a child.

Great story loved reading it!
Aidemstarz
#2
Chapter 1: Awww, so cute :) and Yoongi is such an awesome big brother. Wish I'd had an older brother ;)
ace0fcards
#3
Chapter 1: i wish i had yoongi as a big brother~~
-Tigress-
#4
Chapter 1: Good grief you hit my feels hard with this one! I absolutely adored the different take on heroes. Something like that can mean so much to a younger sibling and it's not easily forgotten, either.
I really loved the realistic way you painted the scene: I can actually remember being afriad of how my toys looked in the dim light of night in my bedroom as a child. That was a really nice touch and it had me even more pulled into your story.
At first I totally thought that there were two beds, not bunk beds, but I don't think that was a fail from your descriptive and instead was my own mind creating that from childhood. Which also shows once again how well you wrote this: it invoked feelings and memories in a way that things rarely do.
In all, I thought this was an awesome take on this prompt!
RavenUchiha
#5
Chapter 1: Aww, so cute.