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She counted how many time she bumps on her. A stranger that probably gonna change her life.

Foreword

So this is my fourth fanfiction, but you can't find my other three anymore since I deactivaed my old account.

Hope you guys like it, I've been wanting to write Hyofany again for so long, but I just cant find the perfect story. This one inspired by Tiffany - Heartbreak Hotel.

You dont have to subscribe to my story, but more comments will help me know if my story is interesting or not. Aand you may get more chapter.

 

 

Sincerily,

Tiggy

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NobuMomu #1
Chapter 1: So I'm totally commenting on my own volition LOL

the way you wrote it makes me feel nostalgic somehow, like we're looking through hyoyeon's memories and I think thats a rather refreshing take. I'm curious as to why Tiffany moved to the city and why hyoyeon seems to be so sad. Hopefully tiffany can be a good distraction. Hyoyeon seems rather glum, it's like she's still getting over a wound that has yet to heal. Under these circumstances, with two people carrying their own burdens, it seems like they can find a good common ground. Also, I like how there's some taengsic in there hehe.

I would however, advise that sentence structure be fixed a bit? The way the words are put together breaks the flow of the mood of the story at times. All in all, I think it was very well written and well placed, with enough to leave the reader wanting. It's a versatile story with many places to go. Good job author - nim =D *hugs*
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