CH4

CURSE
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"Ah........... Everything is looking so fine, isn't it Taeyang?" Ji Yong said, who was checking the view from the hotel's room.

"Hmmm"

"You know what, Taeyang! For somehow, I only became a star just for......." he turns to Taeyang. "What are you doing?"

Taeyang was not giving him any response and looked for some stuff. "Here is it." Finally, he found the papers he was looking for. "Hm, what? You were saying something?" and look at the Ji Yong, who was giving him a disgusting look.

"What bro, please don't make that face. I was looking for this important paper."  and showed the papers in front of his face. Ji Yong snatches the papers away from his hands and throws them out from the window. Taeyang runs to catch the papers, but he's failed. 

"Are you ing mad?..... Those were your upcoming schedules, and some are important upcoming signed contracts." move toward the door.

"Important? Are those ing papers more important for you, more than me?"Ji Yong holds Taeyang's sleeve. "If I'm not giving any importance to these little s, then why you do?"

Taeyang gave him a surprised look " You are unpredictable," and leave the room.

"Okay, go! Go you, idiot, if you came back, I'll every single drop of blood from your body." Ji Yong shouted at the door so Taeyang could hear every word that he was saying, and after shutting the door, he laid on the bed

"Thank God! Even now, I'm free to move around the world, just because of .... "

 

"Dara, catch me if you can" eight-year-old Taeyang challenging her sister to catch him, who was chasing him for her diary.

"Yah! You better stop right there; once I get my hands on you, I'll kill you, buddy." both of them were running around in the garden. Young ten-year-old Dara is still pretty like a doll who came to live. Ji Yong came out from the villa and saw his aged fellow struggling for her life to catch her young brother.

 "Why are you guys running like this?"  young Ji Yong asked innocently

"Jiiiiiiiiiiiiiii  Yooooo-oong helpppppppppp!"  Ji Yong sees Taeyang running in his direction and handed him something and run away when Ji Yong saw that he handed him "It's a diary."

"Runnin........!" Ji Yong turn his head toward the voice direction "Run Ji Yong, run for your life"  after hearing those words, suddenly  Ji Yong feels that he need to run, and he started to run.

"Ji Yong! Please stop right there."

"Dara!? Why are you following me?"

"Ji Yo-ng! Give me back my diary."

"What!!!!" JiYong responds as he can't understand what she is saying, and while catching him, Dara falls to the ground. "Ah!" a little scream escaped from her lips. 

"D-da-ra" Ji Yong and Taeyang both run to Dara "Are you okay?" Taeyang asks her; she pushed him away and snatches her diary from Ji Yong's hands. Dara tried to stand on her feet, but it was hard for her because of the sore on the leg. So Ji Yong put his hand in front of her. "Here, I'll help you." 

Dara looks at Ji Yong. He was smiling brightly. "No, it's okay."  

"Oh, come on, Dara" Ji Yong holds her hand help her to stand  

"Dara, is it hurting?" Taeyang asked for his concern. "Look, I'm sorry" Taeyang touch his ears while saying sorry to his sister. "I swear, I will never tease you again."

"Hey, guys!"  they turn their heads to see a young boy who was came running in their direction.

"Yah! Daesung" Taeyang waves his hand " Why are you here?" he asked as Daesung reached them.

"Wait, let me hold my breath first," he replied while stabling 

"Hi, Dae. How are you?" Ji Yong asked 

"Oh, Hi" Daesung bow to him

"Daesung, Is everything ok ?" Dara ask

"Huh, no, no, I'm just here to bring you guys with me; there is a new park opened in the town. We are all going to visit it, so are you guys coming?" Daesung excitedly asks them to join him. "Sure, why not? Let's go." Taeyang replies and looked at Dara and Ji Yong. Both of them nodded their heads in yes "Let's go," young Ji Yong said and run toward the gate. He was excited, too, as Dara, Taeyang, and Daesung start following him.

"Ji Yong!!!" someone stopped him; Ji Yong turns to see Seung Hyun, who was standing under a tree shadow.

"You can't leave the villa; you know that" Seung Hyun talks to him in a harsh tone "Hyung!!?"  Ji Yong whispers

"You guys can go. He is not coming with you," Seung Hyun order them while keep looking at Ji Yong. "Let's go in Ji Yong. The teacher will be here at any moment" and start the walk. Ji Yong still stands there while looking at his feet. He holds back his emotions and tightens his

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Teneky 699 streak #1
Chapter 25: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

This Hidden Story chapter was actually good. It gave more insight into the things that have happened in their life and there were new characters that really added the spice to the whole 'curse' thing. Jiyoung and Dara are adorable with their son. 👌😍🥰💗

Kai. Kris. Leeteuk. Those faces are fresh and bring their own story. 👍👌✔✨ Leeteuk's character is interesting and impressive, he gave off a mysterious vibe and I loved it.

Then we have Kai. I like his appearance and attitude, but what part I like the most was when he talked with his father and how his father told him the truth regarding everything. The truth can set a person free and at times we might wonder why someone hides things, but sometimes we need to find the right time to say certain secrets and now, it now it was the perfect timing. 👌👍✔✨

And then we have Kris. He gave off a scary vibe in this part and I was right because of the final scene. The ending was not so happy indeed, but yes, their world is cursed, unfortunately. *sighs*

As for the A/N, I agree is never okay and it should never happen to any woman. Regarding her writing, I still think it's good and I can see the effort that you put into this story.

I enjoyed reading it and I can't wait for another story of yours! 😍🥰💗👌✨✔👍🌹

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Teneky 699 streak #2
Chapter 24: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

I'm looking forward to the hidden story 👍👌😏😉

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Teneky 699 streak #3
Chapter 23: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

*claps and bows*

It was a journey alright. So many things happened to the characters in this story, but I will admit and say that I enjoyed it. Each character had a story to tell and I like the plot and point of it. I liked how the curse was described and what had to be done in order to get rid of it. I like the romance aspects of the story too, and I will admit that it had its ups and downs, but either way, the story kept my attention. At times it made me sad, at times it made me worried and at times it made me happy.

This chapter was a mix of everything. It was intense. It was scary. Emotional. But all in all, it was great... but the last scene... broke my heart. I know what he had to do, and I know that it was the only way to get rid of the curse... but still... he had to do it... to his own son. 😭😭

Thank you so much for this great story! I know there is one more part left for me to read and I am looking forward to it!

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Teneky 699 streak #4
Chapter 22: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

Omo! This chapter started off in a cute way! 🥰 Their reactions were cute, despite Bom being the way she was. I loved their reactions to the changes they saw and Seungri was hilarious, especially the picture you added! I love it! 👍✨👌✔ Then there is Jiyong who is embarrassed by what happened, but he was so adorable. 🥰😉😍

Ah, let's face it, none of us like it when we are lied to, especially by the people we care about it, so I can understand her. it hurts and she has every right to be angry. But she is also very smart and I love TOP's reaction. 😉👍 So the thing is simple, Jiyoung needs a baby, drink the blood and he is free. Hmm. It's very interesting and Dara would be the girl. Hmm.

OMG! Finally, Jiyong and Dara talked about the kiss. Dara is so cute with her 'I want my kiss back!' 😂😅 And his reaction is priceless. 😅😂👍

I loved this chapter! Can't wait for more!

Thank you! 🌹💗🌺

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Teneky 699 streak #5
Chapter 21: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

There is a lot of action in this chapter as well and it literally kept me on the edge of my chair, because of the last chapter and the ending of it. The chants they use are still amazing and to be honest, that's one scary dream she had, although, he woke up tied to the bed. But dang, it gave me the shivers. He is quite scary and the whole situation is just mind-blowing!

Omo! I can't wait to see what happens next! He put her trust in her.

Thank you!

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Teneky 699 streak #6
Chapter 20: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

I am glad that the girls talked out their differences and the atmosphere was much lighter. I found it cute when she showed her the dress. *giggles*

The whole concept of Shadow Grave was interesting and I liked it. I found it mysterious and dark at the same time. *winks* OMG! But the fact that she was taken away was surprising! Poor Gummy... I can imagine the anger in her. *sighs*

OMG! Then she is shown and she is learning more about SARCITY, and things seem to be normal, but suddenly it all changes in a blink of an eye. She sees him, and the pendant, it all makes perfect sense!

No! No! No! This can't be! She can't be dead!

Thank you!

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Teneky 699 streak #7
Chapter 19: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

It was a much calmer chapter for sure, and it was good to see that many of them were smiling and were just happy. They deserve to be happy no matter what.

Bom is adorable when angry! *chuckles*

Thank you!

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Teneky 699 streak #8
Chapter 18: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

Another exciting chapter! I like how the story is developing, that's for sure.
But what really stuck out for me, was the part when Jiyong found himself in a grass field and how things came back to him before he went back to reality! Very well described! I loved it.

I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you!

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Teneky 699 streak #9
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This chapter was interesting and cute at the same time! The interesting part was the first part, where he heard the words 'I love you', but when he woke up he was alone in the room, so it makes me wonder if that was really a dream or not, I think not, but we'll see! *winks and smirks* On the other hand what happened later, when they turned in the TV... well it was kind of something was obvious. I wasn't surprised by it, after all, he is famous, so that is something that follows... and sadly CL knew what to do. *sighs*

As for the cute part, finally TOP went out with her! And yes, she is very beautiful. Hehe, no wonder he loved everything about her!

Thank you! 🌹💗

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Teneky 699 streak #10
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Another great chapter! As always I love the picture that you place together with the story. It gives a good description and it's easy to imagine. As for the story of the chapter, it was really good! There was action! Dara is worried about him and it's obvious that she cares, especially when he is reckless. Jiyoung is going through some tough times but drinking doesn't really help, especially the side effects that follow. When he went to the club and continued to drink and smoke, I was like 'No, no, no.' I was worried that something bad would happen and then CL approached him, but in the middle of it all, he pulled away and escapes. Of course, Dara comes to take him home. *smiles*

Thank you! 💗🌹Can't wait to see what happens next! 💗🌹

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