CH14

CURSE
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Jiyong was walking in front of Gummy, who Seung Hyun followed, they were heading to the basement "If you want,....... we can talk in,........." Gummy is about to suggest to them, " No! " both of them scream. She smiles again " Oook! no problem"

As they reach Seung Hyun's study room, Jiyong went to turn on the lights "Oh !" Gummy shout, "What,...what happened," Seung Hyun asked why she was sudden cursing. "Oh my God, you have a ing huge library here" Gummy was amazed.

"This way," Jiyong holds her arm and pulls her " Easy man, " she pouts. After taking many turns around the old book racks, they reach to the corner where another door "Again!......What is this? where are you taking me?" when they enter it was the small room its wall look like they were made from the books and in the middle there was a table with some chairs and a big couch. The room was lighted with fire lamps and candles.

" Nice," she smiles and heads to the couch, and with a jump, she sits on it. " come guys sit around" Seung Hyun and Jiyong also their seats beside her. Now, one was sitting on her right, and the other was sitting in front of her. "Let me get straight. Would you hear, or would you prefer to see" a grin appear on her face?

"What do you mean by seeing?" Jiyong asks, "When the girls came to me, so I show them why are you cursed" Seung Hyun move from his seat and came near her "So you can show everything" his face was bright with a smile

She pushes him back. "Seung Hyun baby, not right now,.............. but I can show you the only thing that you need to know" Jiyong smiled. "Ok, then show us" gummy starts laughing. "Sure, give me your hands " she pushes both hands out, Seung Hyun holds her left hand, and Jiyong holds her right hand.

As she starts her chanting, Seung Hyun and Jiyong look around in shock because the walls around him were spinning, the wind was hard and intense that Seung Hyun and Jiyong hold each other hand as her chantings were getting intense they felt their body moving side to side, they felt like their bones are mixing. In an eyeblink, they were fine. Both of them look around. They were standing in the Hanbyul's hut. The scene where Jaejoong was about to rap her. Everything was going as mentioned in the previous chapter, and Gummy also telling them the whole story. Gummy didn't show the whole rap scene to the girls but the boys.

Seung Hyun and Jiyong felt very awkward when Jaejoong was her. First, they tried to look away, then Seung Hyun's eye caught something " Oh Jiyong ah! look" he runs to an ancient piece " It all is so antique" Jiyong runs after Hyung and joins him in searching every object around the room. Gummy laughs at their awkward act.

Suddenly the scene vanished in the dust, and they were standing in the studying room but still holding the antique piece " Oh come on, we were looking at it," Jiyong.

"Don't shout at me; it wasn't me but her,...... " Gummy replied innocently and pointed her finger towards Park Bom, who was standing in the corner. "You can't mess with others' memories. Otherwise, they can mess you up" Seunghyun look on the right, and Park Bom was standing on their heads now. "May I ask you who were they and why were you showing that disgust to us?" then Jiyong look at Gummy for getting the answer.

"The witch who cursed you." Park Bom answers; Jiyong grins, " I have heard this story tell me something that I don't know."

"Well, that's good, you have heard of it, then I don't have to waste my time telling you. Gummy" Bom, look at her " Oh yes, my lady" Gummy smile as she was waiting for her. "Let's see what we can do for these monsters.

"Oh sure, my love.... ok, but for that, I need blood from both of you."

"And what makes you think that we will give you that" Seung Hyun light up his cigarette.

Bom was angry already. She pulled the cigarette out of his mouth and, while throwing it away," Because we are polite with you and you already know that we can turn your world upside down" she holds his tie and pulls him. "I can easily tear your neck," she was grinding her teeth together.

"Oh my, but still it's no use, babe," Seung Hyun slowly whispers on her lips. "You two, can you guys please stop this" all of them turn their heads toward Dara, who was just entered Bom, step away from him.

"And why we will give you that " Jiyong questioned again to avoid Dara's gaze. "I mean, for what reason do you need our blood" he made his question clear as Bom and Seung Hyun already fought on that.

"Because I will tell you something amazing that you guys haven't realized till yet" Jiyong looks at Seung Hyun. "Should we believe her."

" It's up to you believe us or not, but we will still do that because we promised to Dara,........... at least we are trying to save your lives" as Bom said that Jiyong looked at Dara, who was standing there and the bandage around her neck caught his attention.

"Okay," Jiyong nods after turning his eyes away from Dara. Seunghyun looked suspiciously at him " But Jiyong!" Seung Hyun was still not agreed. "Come on, Hyung, it's just a small amount of blood they need" he looked at them in the hope that what is he saying is right. "Okay, you witch tell us what we have to do," Seung Hyun asked.

"Fine then," Gummy smile and asked them to put the table in the center of the room, and she put some lighted candles around its corners.

Gummy asked them to came and sat in front of her, and both of them follow the order; she closes her eyes and murmur the spell, they felt like a circle covered them ther

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Teneky
671 streak #1
Chapter 25: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

This Hidden Story chapter was actually good. It gave more insight into the things that have happened in their life and there were new characters that really added the spice to the whole 'curse' thing. Jiyoung and Dara are adorable with their son. 👌😍🥰💗

Kai. Kris. Leeteuk. Those faces are fresh and bring their own story. 👍👌✔✨ Leeteuk's character is interesting and impressive, he gave off a mysterious vibe and I loved it.

Then we have Kai. I like his appearance and attitude, but what part I like the most was when he talked with his father and how his father told him the truth regarding everything. The truth can set a person free and at times we might wonder why someone hides things, but sometimes we need to find the right time to say certain secrets and now, it now it was the perfect timing. 👌👍✔✨

And then we have Kris. He gave off a scary vibe in this part and I was right because of the final scene. The ending was not so happy indeed, but yes, their world is cursed, unfortunately. *sighs*

As for the A/N, I agree is never okay and it should never happen to any woman. Regarding her writing, I still think it's good and I can see the effort that you put into this story.

I enjoyed reading it and I can't wait for another story of yours! 😍🥰💗👌✨✔👍🌹

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Teneky
671 streak #2
Chapter 24: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

I'm looking forward to the hidden story 👍👌😏😉

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Teneky
671 streak #3
Chapter 23: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

*claps and bows*

It was a journey alright. So many things happened to the characters in this story, but I will admit and say that I enjoyed it. Each character had a story to tell and I like the plot and point of it. I liked how the curse was described and what had to be done in order to get rid of it. I like the romance aspects of the story too, and I will admit that it had its ups and downs, but either way, the story kept my attention. At times it made me sad, at times it made me worried and at times it made me happy.

This chapter was a mix of everything. It was intense. It was scary. Emotional. But all in all, it was great... but the last scene... broke my heart. I know what he had to do, and I know that it was the only way to get rid of the curse... but still... he had to do it... to his own son. 😭😭

Thank you so much for this great story! I know there is one more part left for me to read and I am looking forward to it!

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Teneky
671 streak #4
Chapter 22: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

Omo! This chapter started off in a cute way! 🥰 Their reactions were cute, despite Bom being the way she was. I loved their reactions to the changes they saw and Seungri was hilarious, especially the picture you added! I love it! 👍✨👌✔ Then there is Jiyong who is embarrassed by what happened, but he was so adorable. 🥰😉😍

Ah, let's face it, none of us like it when we are lied to, especially by the people we care about it, so I can understand her. it hurts and she has every right to be angry. But she is also very smart and I love TOP's reaction. 😉👍 So the thing is simple, Jiyoung needs a baby, drink the blood and he is free. Hmm. It's very interesting and Dara would be the girl. Hmm.

OMG! Finally, Jiyong and Dara talked about the kiss. Dara is so cute with her 'I want my kiss back!' 😂😅 And his reaction is priceless. 😅😂👍

I loved this chapter! Can't wait for more!

Thank you! 🌹💗🌺

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Teneky
671 streak #5
Chapter 21: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

There is a lot of action in this chapter as well and it literally kept me on the edge of my chair, because of the last chapter and the ending of it. The chants they use are still amazing and to be honest, that's one scary dream she had, although, he woke up tied to the bed. But dang, it gave me the shivers. He is quite scary and the whole situation is just mind-blowing!

Omo! I can't wait to see what happens next! He put her trust in her.

Thank you!

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Teneky
671 streak #6
Chapter 20: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

I am glad that the girls talked out their differences and the atmosphere was much lighter. I found it cute when she showed her the dress. *giggles*

The whole concept of Shadow Grave was interesting and I liked it. I found it mysterious and dark at the same time. *winks* OMG! But the fact that she was taken away was surprising! Poor Gummy... I can imagine the anger in her. *sighs*

OMG! Then she is shown and she is learning more about SARCITY, and things seem to be normal, but suddenly it all changes in a blink of an eye. She sees him, and the pendant, it all makes perfect sense!

No! No! No! This can't be! She can't be dead!

Thank you!

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Teneky
671 streak #7
Chapter 19: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

It was a much calmer chapter for sure, and it was good to see that many of them were smiling and were just happy. They deserve to be happy no matter what.

Bom is adorable when angry! *chuckles*

Thank you!

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Teneky
671 streak #8
Chapter 18: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

Another exciting chapter! I like how the story is developing, that's for sure.
But what really stuck out for me, was the part when Jiyong found himself in a grass field and how things came back to him before he went back to reality! Very well described! I loved it.

I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you!

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Teneky
671 streak #9
Chapter 17: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

This chapter was interesting and cute at the same time! The interesting part was the first part, where he heard the words 'I love you', but when he woke up he was alone in the room, so it makes me wonder if that was really a dream or not, I think not, but we'll see! *winks and smirks* On the other hand what happened later, when they turned in the TV... well it was kind of something was obvious. I wasn't surprised by it, after all, he is famous, so that is something that follows... and sadly CL knew what to do. *sighs*

As for the cute part, finally TOP went out with her! And yes, she is very beautiful. Hehe, no wonder he loved everything about her!

Thank you! 🌹💗

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Teneky
671 streak #10
Chapter 16: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

Another great chapter! As always I love the picture that you place together with the story. It gives a good description and it's easy to imagine. As for the story of the chapter, it was really good! There was action! Dara is worried about him and it's obvious that she cares, especially when he is reckless. Jiyoung is going through some tough times but drinking doesn't really help, especially the side effects that follow. When he went to the club and continued to drink and smoke, I was like 'No, no, no.' I was worried that something bad would happen and then CL approached him, but in the middle of it all, he pulled away and escapes. Of course, Dara comes to take him home. *smiles*

Thank you! 💗🌹Can't wait to see what happens next! 💗🌹

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