CH13

CURSE
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~Good Morning, guys~ Dara yawns while entering the kitchen. "What are you doing here?" she asked Bom, who was busy cooking the breakfast. On the other hand, Gummy was enjoying her glass of orange juice.

"Oh, Dara, you are up; come sit here. The breakfast is almost ready." 

"Why are you doing this? Where are Seungri and Daesung? It's their job to do." she turns to shout Seungri's name, but her words stucks to after seeing tied Seungri and Daesung with rope in the corner. "Oh my God," run to help them. "Who did this?" 

"I did," Gummy replied

"What, but why?" and removed the tape from his mouth and untied both of them.

"Because they are so annoying, then I thought."

"Yah! You crazy woman, you wanna die" Daesung run towards her to hit Bom twitch her both fingers together, and in the next moment, Daesung was floating in the air. 

"Ahhh! you witch put me down!" Daesung was screaming

"Stop this, Park Bom; what are you doing?" Dara holds Bom's hand

"Please, please put him down yah you witch, are you even listening to me?" Seungri tried his best to catch their attention, but they totally ignored him. "Look, Dara, first of all, these two idiots don't know how to cook, and whatever they cook is not tasty or hygienic at all. And they didn't let me in, so yeah, I intruded and this" she looks up at Daesung " It is called the self-defense." 

"Okay, Bom, it's enough to let him go," Gummy insist on this who silently enjoyed the moment. "Okay, only you said that's why," and in the next moment, Daesung dropped on the floor. "Daesung" Seungri run and catch him " You watch. I will tell every detail to master Seunghyun!" Seungri screams at her and runs outside because he was scared, and Daesung also followed him on his feet.

"I think Dara, we should be leaving now," Gummy said. "No, not yet," Dara insisted. "Look, Dara, it been two days since we came here, and since then, neither your lord came back, and from the last night, your Master is lost as well." 

Dara looks down and says, "Yes, you are right, but I know there is something...." she stops as she hears someone whistling, and then her younger brother Taeyang passes by. "Yah! Taeyang, you come here" as he hears his noona voice, he stops and comes to her 

"Oh, good morning, noona!" Dara hugs him. "Good morning Taeyang but can you tell me where are Jiyong and Seunghyun?" Taeyang smile and says, "Jiyong is busy in the promotion for two days, and I don't know anything about Seunghyun maybe he is busy too" Dara gives him a deadly stare, Taeyang was continuously smiling as he saw Dara's angry face his smile fade away "I know you are lying, look Taeyang if Jiyong is busy you wouldn't be here I know why he is not home" Taeyang tried to smile but couldn't keep up and bow down his head in the embarrassment "Okay, you can leave"

"I'm sorry Dara, actually I also don't know where he is also he didn't receive my calls,................oh a phone I have to take it " Taeyang put the phone on his ear " Oh yes,........... Sorry noona!" and run away because he had just lied to her.

"Seems like they are afraid to face us" Gummy trolls the whole situation.

 

 

~knock~knock~

"Come in..." Jiyong entered in Seunghyun's room

Seunghyunwas is busy on a call and also holding his phone in the other hand. Still, he gives the gesture to Jiyong to sit down " Yes, I know it really well thanks I'll call you later, okay bye,...................... (now on his cellphone) Sorry for making you wait, Mr. Lee oh yes, yes, the order will be replaced today I had already forwards all details to your secretary, yeah, yeah sure why not,............anytime okay........... bye " he placed his phone on the table and looked at Jiyong's face "Jiyong,........" he whispers. 

Jiyong was wearing a long overcoat, and he was looking like a ghost. "Where were you Jiyong, are you ok?" Seunghyun come to him and take the seat next to him. 

"I'm fine, man " he pushes his

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Teneky
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Chapter 25: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

This Hidden Story chapter was actually good. It gave more insight into the things that have happened in their life and there were new characters that really added the spice to the whole 'curse' thing. Jiyoung and Dara are adorable with their son. 👌😍🥰💗

Kai. Kris. Leeteuk. Those faces are fresh and bring their own story. 👍👌✔✨ Leeteuk's character is interesting and impressive, he gave off a mysterious vibe and I loved it.

Then we have Kai. I like his appearance and attitude, but what part I like the most was when he talked with his father and how his father told him the truth regarding everything. The truth can set a person free and at times we might wonder why someone hides things, but sometimes we need to find the right time to say certain secrets and now, it now it was the perfect timing. 👌👍✔✨

And then we have Kris. He gave off a scary vibe in this part and I was right because of the final scene. The ending was not so happy indeed, but yes, their world is cursed, unfortunately. *sighs*

As for the A/N, I agree is never okay and it should never happen to any woman. Regarding her writing, I still think it's good and I can see the effort that you put into this story.

I enjoyed reading it and I can't wait for another story of yours! 😍🥰💗👌✨✔👍🌹

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Teneky
697 streak #2
Chapter 24: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

I'm looking forward to the hidden story 👍👌😏😉

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Teneky
697 streak #3
Chapter 23: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

*claps and bows*

It was a journey alright. So many things happened to the characters in this story, but I will admit and say that I enjoyed it. Each character had a story to tell and I like the plot and point of it. I liked how the curse was described and what had to be done in order to get rid of it. I like the romance aspects of the story too, and I will admit that it had its ups and downs, but either way, the story kept my attention. At times it made me sad, at times it made me worried and at times it made me happy.

This chapter was a mix of everything. It was intense. It was scary. Emotional. But all in all, it was great... but the last scene... broke my heart. I know what he had to do, and I know that it was the only way to get rid of the curse... but still... he had to do it... to his own son. 😭😭

Thank you so much for this great story! I know there is one more part left for me to read and I am looking forward to it!

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Teneky
697 streak #4
Chapter 22: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

Omo! This chapter started off in a cute way! 🥰 Their reactions were cute, despite Bom being the way she was. I loved their reactions to the changes they saw and Seungri was hilarious, especially the picture you added! I love it! 👍✨👌✔ Then there is Jiyong who is embarrassed by what happened, but he was so adorable. 🥰😉😍

Ah, let's face it, none of us like it when we are lied to, especially by the people we care about it, so I can understand her. it hurts and she has every right to be angry. But she is also very smart and I love TOP's reaction. 😉👍 So the thing is simple, Jiyoung needs a baby, drink the blood and he is free. Hmm. It's very interesting and Dara would be the girl. Hmm.

OMG! Finally, Jiyong and Dara talked about the kiss. Dara is so cute with her 'I want my kiss back!' 😂😅 And his reaction is priceless. 😅😂👍

I loved this chapter! Can't wait for more!

Thank you! 🌹💗🌺

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Teneky
697 streak #5
Chapter 21: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

There is a lot of action in this chapter as well and it literally kept me on the edge of my chair, because of the last chapter and the ending of it. The chants they use are still amazing and to be honest, that's one scary dream she had, although, he woke up tied to the bed. But dang, it gave me the shivers. He is quite scary and the whole situation is just mind-blowing!

Omo! I can't wait to see what happens next! He put her trust in her.

Thank you!

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Teneky
697 streak #6
Chapter 20: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

I am glad that the girls talked out their differences and the atmosphere was much lighter. I found it cute when she showed her the dress. *giggles*

The whole concept of Shadow Grave was interesting and I liked it. I found it mysterious and dark at the same time. *winks* OMG! But the fact that she was taken away was surprising! Poor Gummy... I can imagine the anger in her. *sighs*

OMG! Then she is shown and she is learning more about SARCITY, and things seem to be normal, but suddenly it all changes in a blink of an eye. She sees him, and the pendant, it all makes perfect sense!

No! No! No! This can't be! She can't be dead!

Thank you!

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Teneky
697 streak #7
Chapter 19: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

It was a much calmer chapter for sure, and it was good to see that many of them were smiling and were just happy. They deserve to be happy no matter what.

Bom is adorable when angry! *chuckles*

Thank you!

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Teneky
697 streak #8
Chapter 18: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

Another exciting chapter! I like how the story is developing, that's for sure.
But what really stuck out for me, was the part when Jiyong found himself in a grass field and how things came back to him before he went back to reality! Very well described! I loved it.

I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you!

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Teneky
697 streak #9
Chapter 17: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

This chapter was interesting and cute at the same time! The interesting part was the first part, where he heard the words 'I love you', but when he woke up he was alone in the room, so it makes me wonder if that was really a dream or not, I think not, but we'll see! *winks and smirks* On the other hand what happened later, when they turned in the TV... well it was kind of something was obvious. I wasn't surprised by it, after all, he is famous, so that is something that follows... and sadly CL knew what to do. *sighs*

As for the cute part, finally TOP went out with her! And yes, she is very beautiful. Hehe, no wonder he loved everything about her!

Thank you! 🌹💗

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Teneky
697 streak #10
Chapter 16: 🌹💗🌹💗🌹

Another great chapter! As always I love the picture that you place together with the story. It gives a good description and it's easy to imagine. As for the story of the chapter, it was really good! There was action! Dara is worried about him and it's obvious that she cares, especially when he is reckless. Jiyoung is going through some tough times but drinking doesn't really help, especially the side effects that follow. When he went to the club and continued to drink and smoke, I was like 'No, no, no.' I was worried that something bad would happen and then CL approached him, but in the middle of it all, he pulled away and escapes. Of course, Dara comes to take him home. *smiles*

Thank you! 💗🌹Can't wait to see what happens next! 💗🌹

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