Chapter 1: What a fresh concept. You have an active imagination, and a unique writing style to boot. Your usage of the present tense was flawless! Nice one, author!
Chapter 1: Oh god this is bittersweet.. although it's heartbreaking to read TT^TT I like and appreciate how moonsun and the ot4 stil end up together even after all that ordeal. It's like fate will always bring them together no matter the circumstances. That's just how soulmates and family works.
Yet another great storytelling, i hope to see more mmm and moonsun frm you!
Chapter 1: This is one hell f a good work, my god. I cried.
At first I was like 'Is this gonna be the past AU where you write about the time before their debut?'. But no, you surprise me with Moonbyul quit from RBW lol. What a great turn of event! It's really interesting the way thing happen after the choice she made.
And you balance it so well between the amount of Byul history, life, and her love life. I really like the flow of the story.
Great work!
Also, it really broke my heart while reading and thought about if Byul really quit, if she is not one of Mamamoo.
P.S. I'm patiently waiting for Dreams Only Last For a Night, so I re-read the whole story while waiting. But I already finished it so... I might re-read it again lol.
Chapter 1: OH MY GOD SIMBA THIS WAS SO FREAKING GOOOOOD AHHHH
The story was so great, so angsty all along but then the sun came up and awwww. Made my chest tighten up a bit for most of the story, but I could still kind of feel that things are gonna get good yet at the same time I just couldn't stop tearing up. Also, your writing developed so much since the last fic I've read from you (which, admittedly, wasn't in the near past, I'm bad, I'm sorry T_T), woah. And you slayed the present tense, it was perfect, please experiment with it more in the future.
Definitely one of my fav oneshots, thank you for sharing it *.*
Chapter 1: This is so good.
I don't think I've read a fic where Byul is in a different group so this caught my interest the more I read it. Didn't think that Byul would leave RBW! Hurts enough that she left her family, and then knowing that she and Yongsun had something going before she left... ;_; Love how you wrote the sadness that Byul felt here.
Quite like the way you describe Sunset Girls, especially how understanding they were, and just how much of a leader Haneul was.
Like how this ends with Byul having 2 families now, especially with Sunset Girls teasing her and all.
Chapter 1: that was a hell of a good story.... damn... it is kind of sad for me to just imagine all of this being true, poor moonbyul. I'm now happier than ever that she decided to stay in RBW, MAMAMOO wouldn't be the same without her or any of the members for that matter. Love the story though, I'm super into it, great job author! Keep up with the good work!
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