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Choi Aerin // Kim Sunggyu

 

Haha so this is my character (Maggie). Due to inconveniences, we will not be doing separate reviews. we learned last time that Annie was way too busy to update her review, so whatever I review, Annie's opinion will be the same.

That being said, if Annie really wants to say something, she will. Lol yeah she's not dead yet. Also, if you don't want a public review, PM me and we can talk about that.

My example app is , so you really want to focus on reading the cheatsheet, but if you really want it, my app is here. Don't worry, we'll be lenient with reviewing lol.

Finally_Home — chosen

Shin Anhee // Jung Hoseok

 

Ayo this is Annie's character. She may have things to say but this is just me being an impatient and uploading the things so we can get applicants XD. Ahhh, yeah... I'm not a good person lol.

Anyway yeah, please read the cheatsheet, and remember to have fun! By the way, none of the links on any of the other pages work; the only ones that work are the ones at the bottom of the cheatsheet. I (Maggie) was too lazy to copy and paste so much lol.

This is Annie's app. Feel free to ask questions if you have them lol

marshybleep — chosen

Lee Byul

 

Hi, Lizzy! Whoa, you’re really fast XD. Boi we have a Byul in our other story too omg. Aww, that’s cute! Gray’s her older brother! I love how casually you incorporated AOMG into your app lol. Wow, her height and weight are really specific lol we’ll probably round those up to whole numbers.

Holy . We were talking about Yeojin, actually, when we were discussing concepts. She’s a frog lol and we were like omg animals-- lol. Can you tell us where her most prominent/important scars are and how she got them?
Ah, we can’t see your fashion gallery ;;; but that’s okay, I think we have a pretty good idea of her fashion sense lol. Plus, mentioning Gray buying stuff for her really helps XD.

I think her personality’s pretty realistic, and actually, she sounds a lot like my character for your story, haha. You didn’t describe much, but that’s okay since we can make it work out. After all, we’ll just say it’s purposely vague because you don’t know what we’re planning ;))

Boiii Gray recommended his own company XDD wow what a guy. Awww, she trained so hard! Damn, her grades must have suffered XD.

Can you describe all your relations and friends? Like the relationships Byul has with them and how they became friends etc.

Lol I love the fandom name! It’s so cute! Okay, you're all set!

vampirekiss — accepted

Kim Jaein // Kim Jonghyun

 

Hey, Ari! I’ll admit, I’ve seen you around before XD but I never really read your character, so I’m interested.

Okay, so far I really like the basic info, and I admit I’ve never heard of 4Ten before but you gave a gallery so I think we’ll be fine. Oh, unusual eyes, I like that. Bruh, an emo character omg.

Okay, I think your character’s personality is very realistic, but we’re going to lower her IQ to about 110, okay? 140’s like borderline genius, and that’s like 0.00001% of the population XD. We’re also not going to make it so that she just knows, but more so she has a good memory. Oh, yes, I really like the violence XD we asked just for that.

Ehhh, we like the background, about how her family’s all druggies and stuff… but personally, I would have preferred a less-known family lol. Mhm, I like the background, but I’m not going to have her join BVB. Oh, Roy Kim’s agency, that’s nice. How did she end up at SM? What happened to MMO? Please connect SM and MMO in some way.

Omg I’ve never heard of waacking before but it looks great! Aw, her birth brother ;;; I love him already (although it’s sad how they’re no longer close). Due to the group being in Korea, however, we will undoubtedly focus more on Jooseok than Andy, and Andy will probably show up more in her memories. Oh, oh boi, Taemin lol.

It’s totally okay if you can’t describe idol personalities lol I feel you. I just feel like it’s sad how Dani ended up in abusive relationships over and over ;;; although I’m confused, did he just, yell at her for that one small thing? Ugh, what an lol.

Boi I love all those scene requests yassss me gustaaa. Okay, I think you’re fine as long as you change the, uh, few things we had? Thanks again!

Annie: hi I'm not dead. Yeah, we really like your character, but my main two points are: the IQ thing, but Maggie already mentioned that. The other thing that bothers me is that her brother is Andy Biersack. Can he not be her brother? I feel like it would be really hard to juggle that and her birth brother, the group, etc. Thanks for applying, though!

xXMonstaAriXx — pending

Shin Jiae // Lee Sungjong

 

Ayyyy friendo! I’m gonna call you Jazz just because lol. I’m lowkey really excited to see what you cooked up this time >:))))

Okay, not a big deal because I read your last comments, but I’m going to change her Chinese name to Yueli to better suit the language lol. Lmao I had a feeling I was going to see Jiae again XDD and I did indeed. JINSPIRIT I’M NOT CRYING AT ALL OMG-- NHHHHG HAHA that nickname elaborations kill me omgggg and dude Tulsa (how specific lol) and seriously, I feel like she’s going to get along so well with Aerin--

SEO JISOO ANNIE IS GOING TO LOVE YOU DAMN gIRLL-- pshhh somewhat creepy dw fam we’re all dead inside here. HWASAAAAA ;;;; bby girl and holy yas I love. SHE GIVES NO S LOL much like most of us irl here lmaooooo and awww the baby colors yesss. Ah, I just looked up Saucony shoes and they look damn expensive-- hnnnng don’t be insecurreeee ;;;

‘Not very funny with her dad jokes’ I’m crying. SHe’s the daddy ;))) if you know what I mean //shot. Ahh omg the personality’s amazing boi I love-- and hehe she resorts to violence.

AWWWWWWW I LOVE THE PARENTS OMFG XD IDEK FAM but damn I love that persistence. Not often you find Asians in the plains area. LMAO you accidentally wrote Jineul instead of Jiae but psh it’s fine I know what you meant. Awww Jinheo :”)))) I love that squishy bby already. PFFT math is her nemesis I’m choking-- but damn she sounds like one of those gangsters XD. Don’t worry, Jiae, everyone here has OKPD too :DD. Nora sounds like a friend I would kill for omgggg. Oh god her wheedling XD sounds like me tbh. WHAT NO! HER DAD OMG I LOVED HIM :”((((((((( I”M CRY WHY YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEE

Awwwwwwwwww yesssssss I love the trainingggg. BUT OH SHIET I think by accident you left out all the trivia :”(((( I was looking forward to that

Boi Wonhoe omg XD boi Mum is one of those typical Asian moms XD like they fight as much as they can but then still support it. OMG DADDY SHOWNUUUUU-- yassssss I love him, and finally we get to Nora :DD om ing g her bias is Aerin??? I’m ing cvrying-- but yes she’s a fair friend I love herrrrr <333

I’m also fuciing crying Sungjong’s both her primary and her backup and also I love how the hyungs make fun of Jjongie okay mini rant sorry not sorry-- ((okay no but I’m literally listening to Man in Love and giggling my off)) HUHUHU TONGUE-TIED JJONG I’m so ing dead diva boy better get her or else-- OMG SHE USED TO BIAS DONGWOO??? MY THIRD BIAS IS DONGWOO XD (okay actually my third bias is him and Namu tied but--) hnngngngngg I’m having a heart attack I can’t with this couple damn

HAHAH HE BABBLED TO DONGGYU I”M CRY-- also I in glove this fan relationship XD it’s adorable omg. Awww :”(((( this boii and that ambition damn I’m hurt too XD

WHY WOULD I KILL YOU OMG we’re literally drowning in boredom lol so the more applicants the better tbh. Also right I give a piece of my ing soul to every single character I make and that’s why I have no soul-- yasss I love scenes also I AGREE WITH THE PASSWORD LMFAO

Yeahh boiii!! You're all set!

jazzwithdrift — accepted

Bae Subin // Kim Youngkyun

 

Hi, Liam! Let me just start of saying that I LOVE Mina. Okay, but first things first, you have not subscribed. Please do so as soon as possible so you can stay updated! Also, you put her height as 1.61 cm, and I doubt she’s one centimeter tall lol, but it’s okay, I know what you meant. Her appearance lacks a little, but I think we’ll be fine. I like the fashion part too.

I like how Subin can show all different parts of her, but I think you’ve described her in a very positive light, as a ‘Golden Maknae’. We would like you to elaborate on Subin’s negative traits more, and please make her a ‘jack of all trades, master of none’.

The background is where I am the most confused. First off, where is her father? Also, why would she be scared of loud noises from a move? Also, you mentioned that when she was 14, she saw audition posters, but later in the sentence, she is now 17. I would like her to be 14, please. I am really confused about the last sentence of the first paragraph; why would Suzy’s heart be broken?

She wanted to start acting? This is an idol fic, and the girls are singers. Please make that a hobby or something she’s trying out. The rest of this paragraph makes no sense; you already said she got into SM when she was 16, which meant that she would have only had one year left to train and move to AOSU, which doesn’t match up with the story you gave. Also, what did happen to AOSU? I am assuming that you copied and pasted this background from a different applyfic and did not change it to fit our story (hence Boyoung and everything else I said)

Three years in AOSU? That goes with what I said before about your background; please make sure everything fits. You only have four likes, but I’ll let you off on that. SAme with habits. Can you please expand on her relationship with Suzy? Also, why does she have no friends? Please either: give her some friends and expand on their relationships, or explain why she has no friends.

Annie is squealing over Hwiyoung. I’m sorry, who is Woho? I’m not familiar with SF9, but since your love interest is Hwiyoung, please remove Woho and focus on Hwiyoung. Also, why is he a weiner? Can you tell me what school they met in? I just need to know if it was elementary, middle, or high school. I like how he kept track of the group, but if she likes him, why can’t she stand him? Please explain this.

I like your scene requests, and thank you so much! I will say, though, the hex color for white is #ffffff… but it’s okay since it’s just white (and there’s only one shade of white). Please first subscribe, bold your changes, and then comment when you have fixed your app.

KwonBoAh — pending

Lee Minhee // Eric Nam

 

FINALLY A MERMAID! I’m ing hype, man! Annie’s so excited about Solar XD and tbh she’s ing gorgeous we both love her. Bruh, I feel, I always feel weird without my bracelet as well XD. Awwww, I love her fashion omg and thank you so much for blessing us with those pictures. Damn I really like the realisticness of this character. Tbh like honestly that’s probably something that happens with models all the ing time and it’s so sad ;;; Omg her background bruh that was actually legit what I was looking for though tbh you read my mind (sorta XD). And tbh I could sleep all day too?? Dude I love her relations though XD and honestly when I saw Gary I thought ‘Leessang??’ and okay, can you put Lee Hyori in the relationships too? Annie’s crying because Eric Nam and I admit I screamed too lol. Eh, you don’t have any negative points about him, but I think we’ll be okay. Eric Nam’s company is not SM; they would not have met through the company. Please fix that. I definitely love the amusement park thing, and I LOVE the scene requests. Alright, you're all set!

soni-rose — chosen

Lee Sooyoung // Jeon Jungkook

 

Hey, Nicole! Let me just say, I think you’re our third fairy applicant XD why does everyone love this plotline so much lmao. I laughed at shikshin because Choi Sooyoung is shikshin--

I really want to use Joy because I’m possessive over Halla but it’s okay XD. I love her fashion dude omg and no pants psh. WHOA JYP XDD going big, eh? Omg she likes horror she won’t get along with Aerin at all lmao. Whoo, 97 line XD I like that. I WILL CRY 15& MY BBYSSSS XDRTFSEIDKAX. AND YUGYEOMMIEEEE RFUJDZKSDLXZ. Also lowkey off-topic but I ship Halla and Jungkook fr lmao. Awwwww that’s ing-- ;;;;; I’m crying ;;; and damn, is Star Golden Bell still airing? Btw yes it does lol. I don’t see anything wrong, and thank you so much for applying!

xINeedUx — chosen

Moon SeAh // Kim Taehyung

 

Hey, Mirami! Annie's squealing over Luda XD and I'm happy that we finally got a witch. DAMN first girl in three generations that's harsh. Ah, I've always wanted to visit Australia.

Omg don't worry about the resting face because tbh Annie says I have one too lol. Ah, I can't see the fashion gallery but that's okay lol I get the gist of it.

Awwwww mom friend :"))) AWWWWW SHE'S AN ELF, VIP, AND SONEEEE YES awww ;;;; five years of training damn girl I love her family omg like fr if Aerin wasn't already Sunggyu's I'd ask you if she could date Jinsoo XD also OMG SHE HAS A FRIEND CALLED AERIN boiiii I'm gonna find so much fun in this

Also Annie's fangirling over BTS (trash lol) but it really is very cute awwwww are they not officially together??? THAT'S SO SAD I WAS GONNA LIKE, IDK, I WANTED IT TO HAPPEN ;;;;

But yeah, I think everything's good from me XD if Annie doesn't have anything to say, you're accepted!

MiracleOrange — accepted

Choi Boyoung // Jang Wooyoung

 

Alright, hey, Ami! I'm glad someone else applied for witch! XD alright, your faceclaim is realllly pretty and I love that she cooks?? Whoa she's so much older than the rest of them XD oh, ouch, 50kg is a little underweight for her height ;;; but I like her basic info. Awww, her messiness is something I feel lol my desk rn needs a lot of organizing. I feel like she has too many positive traits but it's okay lol. Ahhh, everything is explained in the background: she's anemic.

Although, if she had a good relationship with her parents, why are they ranked so low? In her relationships, I mean. Also, please expand on her relationship with them, if possible.

Awwwww hahah my Sone heart went SEOHYUN? TAEYEON? I don't follow 2PM at all, but Wooyoung is adorableee and I love his personality. I mean, who would want to waste time on fakers, right? AWWWW SHE SAID HER NAME WAS WOOYOUNG XD that's adorable I love it!

Alright, you're good to go! Thank you again!

Kpop_kitty — accepted

Song Yunji // Kang Insoo

 

Hey there, Rei! It’s nice to see you again! First off, I lowkey really love her name XD it’s so unique! Your basic info is fine, and we love that she’s so involved in different things! Boi I lowkey love Juniel omggesrsifjdf she’s my bae okay sorry XD okay but I was really shook and pleasantly surprised when I saw the Hispanic host family it’s so unique??? Like me UP I love that!! I do feel like she has a bit much going on lol she a busy girl but whatevs loool. Ooooh she was training with YG, nice nice. YO YANG SEUNGHO I LOVE MBLAQ OKAY XD and omg Selena Gomez is gorgeous ;;; ooh I had never heard of SuPearls before, but it’s a pity they broke up ;;; AND YOOOO INSOOOOO boi I love how they meet! Aw rippp college will be us next year tbh good luck though! We didn’t find anything wrong XD so you’re accepted!

xXxRei_YuyaxXx — accepted

Lee Taemi // Kang Taeoh

 

Hi Sien! Nice to see you again! Okay, now I see what you mean by having a young faceclaim XD. However, Annie and I do have a few suggestions about her:

The character’s age is fine, and we love how cute she is, but the faceclaims a little young for our plans. Basically, we would like you to find a faceclaim who’s just a little bit older XD. Also, the group is a bit young. I know you really wanted to use her ;;;;; and we do find her cute, but later on, we’re going to need photos from different concepts, and between the age and the newness of the group (and the backup group too!), there won’t be a lot of options, so we would like a faceclaim from a more established group, please!

Other than that, I think you’re all set! We really loved the love interest and relationship parts, and her personality seems fine too :DD thank you so much for applying!

SienL1 — accepted

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Considering how midterms are around this time (and how lazy we are) we might be delaying our next chapter lol

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MiracleOrange #1
Chapter 16: Seah and Sooyoung, I love it. So cute.
I love how real raw emotions come through like anxiety and stress, hoping the best for the showcasee!
and totally agree plan chicken !
HiRitu
#2
Chapter 16: Aaww those poor girls... I'm sure they will be fine though! The variety show will go well
soni-rose
#3
Chapter 16: omg this chapter.
i love this so much :')
you incorporated so much in just one chapter.
i hope the variety show and photoshoot goes well for the girls.
can't wait for the next chapter. take your time authors!:)
contaminated
#4
Chapter 16: Oh my god the poor girls. A variety show ^^; I can't help but feel sorry for them (and Jiae because she's the go-between of these nutters) and hope everything turns out fine. I almost wish they had more time to practice but this is idol life.
MiracleOrange #5
Chapter 15: The melody is so cute and vibrant and light I really like it
Vampirekiss
#6
I love the medley
xINeedUx
#7
Chapter 15: I think it’s cool how you made this.
soni-rose
#8
Chapter 15: Omg you put one step two step♡♡:')
Oh my girl are my bbys♡♡
Thank you so much
The medley is so perfect♡
soni-rose
#9
Chapter 14: Oh wow. I didn't see that coming.:0
This is going to be so good.
No worries girls. We will wait.
Hope your Christmas went well.:)
contaminated
#10
Chapter 14: Ohhh ! She was pulled out :o welp at least Jiae treats the girls XDDD