My mother's best friend's daughter

Description

 

Ballet is everything to Mina. She dedicated her whole life to become the best dancer in her dancing school, JYP Nation. And she would have been long ago, if only one person didn't prevent that. Hirai Momo was a stuck-up, smug looking girl who impressed everyone with her dancing skills. And it wouldn't have bearable, if only Momo's mother wasn't the best friend of Mina's mother. That meant their families were always somehow connected, which led to Mina spending a lot more time with the blonde than she wanted to. 
On top of that, they were forced to spend time together when Momo was recruited for Hit the Stage, a killer dancing show that only let the best dancers participate. The more they practice together, the more Mina notices the change in her heart for the daughter of her mother's best friend. 

 

Foreword

This story will be a short story and contain three chapters, each one for one of the stages Momo did at Hit the Stage. The last one will be a closing chapter.
I'm not a native English speaker, so please forgive me for my grammar mistakes. 
And finally I'd like to say... Enjoy! 

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ImMina-nim #1
Chapter 3: Ouch... good but bad final. I want them together u.u Amazing story!!
Pumpkin513 #2
Sounds promising!
cutey111 147 streak #3
Chapter 3: Just wow! You have a special way with words, Plus Plot charachters and descriptions were on point. Great job!
AugustK88 #4
Chapter 3: My MiMo heart... I can't contain it... though the ending hurts, I love your writing style. Hope you can write more, hopefully with a MiMo ending this's time. Thanks! :)
JCMinho #5
I am so done with my life right now. I mean Crazy in love was on repeat and I was reading this and I just ugh!
I love the story. I love your writing but I freaking hate the ending. I love everything but the ending.
Thank you for making me read such an amazing story.
kli678 #6
Chapter 3: This ending... oh my. I still love it though. Its a really beautiful story. I was really surprised by the ending though.
snitchdragon #7
Chapter 3: this is probably the best twice fanfiction i've read so far (and believe me, i've read TOO MANY). i love the plot and character development of this story and the way you manage to pull the readers in with the flow of your sentences. i love your descriptions as well and the fact that english isn't your native language is kinda surprising to me because its so well put together like hOW PLeAsE tEaCH mE ??!??!?!?
TLDR I LOVE THIS. MY HEART HURTS. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE STORY AND PLEASE NEVER STOP WRITING <3
smolredmarker #8
Chapter 3: i liked that ending. it may not be what i hoped for but it was still unpredictable and that's what made it interesting. thanks for this story!
unexpectedfeel #9
Chapter 3: I don't know if my heart is broken or not ? Because it was really well written and not every stories can have a happy ending and it doesn't mean I disliked this story because I liked it very much but I am so confused with my feelings right now. Some people just keep this incredible chemistry and I wonder how both.. just never end up making it because the tension is TOO much. Probably thanx to Mina's morals (and not thank you to this "ed up" thing between them which is totally like their duo in hit the stage) and thank you author for this beautiful little fanfic! I hope you will write more about MiMo!
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