Ice and Water

Description

This story set in a fantasy world that I created myself.

There is a land called Brume that is currently on a civil war. Brume is ruled by a King and there are rebels who wants to overthrow him. There are several cities in Brume, ruled by a High Lord or a High Lady. Some of them served the King, some of them rebelled against him.

The southern part of Brume is mountainous and that is where the capital city, Blaaz, located. There are icy mountains in the northern part of Brume and that is where one of the strongest highborn family lives. Another strongest and most feared highborn family lives in Brume’s coast in a city called Vatten. Both of these highborn family still served the King.

The characters:

Irene

She is a highborn Lady and currently ruling her hometown, Icebound, as a High Lady. As the High Lady of Icebound, Irene and her ancestors have the ability to control the Ice. Icebound located in the northern part of Brume around the icy mountains. Even though she is a Lady, she is actually a skilled warrior.

Suho

He is a highborn Lord and currently ruling his hometown, Vatten, as a High Lord. Vatten is a city located in Brume’s coast. Suho and his ancestors have the ability to control the water.

Sehun

Sehun is the Prince and the heir of Brume. He lives in Brume’s capital city Blaaz. He has an ability to control the Wind.

Another important place to know:

The Hole

A place located in the untouched area of Brume. The people Brume usually dumped a prisoner or a traitor to this untouched area. If they could not make it out (no one ever could) they will have to face their biggest fear and it will never end. It’s kind of a torture machine and will make you lose your mind. The ones who can free a prisoner from this area is the King and his true heir.

 

Foreword

Hello, this is sekainim, back at it again with another surene story.

This time I have a romance fantasy story for you. I hope you like it.

The names for the cities and the land took me long enough to decide. Those are random English, French and Swedish words that I think sounds cool and I changed it a bit. I googled all of them.

This story will be a two-part story and I'm going to post the second part next week or two weeks later from now, i don't know. I want to see how people react to this first.

With that, if you like and enjoy this story, comment down below because I really want to know what you guys think about it. I'm open for critics as well because it is my first time writing a high-fantasy story. Share it to your friends because I really really want to know what people think of my story.

Thank you very much for clicking this story.

Enjoy.

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EastVillage
#1
Can't expect you'll ever see this, but I really love the 1st chapter