II. Questionnable Teamwork

Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
 

ii. questionnable teamwork

CARDS headquarters
—  turkey; 23.7.2017

  The Great Glyph of the Sidhe, the Ankh, the Larimar...As soon as the meeting was adjourned, Saebin started counting on her fingers, desperately trying to remember the six objects that were mentioned. Each was supposed to represent one class of Underworlders, though she wasn't quite sure which was which, now.

  "...now?" 

  One of her teammates' voices jolted her out of her stupor, and Saebin blinked once to force herself back to reality. She could see one of the younger boys - at least, that was what she assumed, from his slightly messy appearance - talking to the man introduced as their leader, with another, whom she recognized as a General from previous trips to Diamantes, standing behind him, almost like a shadow.

  "Yes, but not right now." There was a thin layer of exasperation in the leader's tone, though he hid it well. "It's the middle of the night now; we should get some sleep." 

  Wait...what was the topic again? 

  "I think you would find that the advantage of having an Unseelie in your team is that they work best in the middle of the night. Preferably ungodly hours." The younger retorted stubbornly, causing the General to sigh and put a hand on his shoulder, seemingly to stop him from worsening the situation.

  Before the leader could respond to that, however, the other woman in the team, a tall and rather intimidating figure, looked up from staring at her communication device, and sneered, "Underworlder." 

  Saebin was taken aback by that reaction; she could sense the others being that as well, because as far as she knew, CARDS did have Underworlders. They encouraged co-existence with Underworlders, to the point of even tolerating their admission to their ranks.

  "I beg your pardon...?" There was a tense pause, broken only when someone spoke quietly; Saebin guessed it was the suit-wearing individual, though she wasn't sure. 

  “You heard me.” The woman fired back, discontent and contempt obvious in her manner. There was a sneer hanging on her lips, and though Saebin wasn’t well-versed in the art of people-observing, it could be clearly seen that she despised Underworlders. 

  Which was funny, because nearly all of the members of Wonderland were Underworlders. 

  “What do you mean by that, exactly?” The man continued, carefully. She could see that some of their members were getting agitated too, especially the young boy who was arguing with the leader earlier. Saebin didn’t blame them; she felt slightly angry too. 

  “I would’ve thought you lot would have some brains. Apparently not.” There was a slight, tense pause, before she continued. “Oh dear, should I spell it out for you?”

  “Why you - “ The younger boy, in a fit of anger, had taken a step forward threateningly; it took both the General and the suit-wearing man to hold him back. With that, Saebin decided to fade back into the shadows, stepping back before vanishing altogether, determined to write down what she had heard from the meeting so that she would remember.

  As she walked down the side corridor, flats effectively silencing her footsteps, the sounds of her new members bickering echoed down the narrow passageway she was travelling in. Judging from the rising tones of the woman and the boy who was held back, not to mention the leader, who was trying to make the situation better, Saebin had a bad feeling that their team was going down sooner than anyone of them would've thought, even from the start.

  Not that it was exactly a terrible thing, however.

  The Great Glyph of the Sidhe, the Ankh, the Larimar...

  Did Daehyun really think the meeting would go well? No. But did Daehyun think it would be this bad? No.

  (Well, sort of, but it didn't really matter.)

  He had honestly hoped that the meeting would adjourn peacefully, and that everyone would have some rest before being thrown into the fray of the battle - like what their leader had said. Judging from Carroll's tone and the brief missions the head of CARDS had outlined for them, Daehyun knew that there would be much travelling around and fighting and searching to do.

  After all, experience hadn't exactly taught him nothing.

  But of course, Daehyun's luck being Daehyun's luck, he didn't get what he had hoped for. 

  "You shouldn't have held me back, Dae," The boy he was somewhat dragging down the corridor grumbled, still annoyed from their previous exchange. "I could've controlled myself."

  For what seemed like the fifth time that night, the General sighed, and let go of Hyunwook's wrist, which he rubbed somewhat resentfully as he turned around to face the younger. "By controlling yourself, do you mean cursing Helena with every ounce of Unseelie knowledge you have?" As Hyunwook opened his mouth to reply, Daehyun cut him off, saying, "You know what, never mind."

  The older man started his trudging down the chrome corridor again, with Hyunwook walking next to him, silent for once. After a tense pause, he started again. "That wasn't fair, Daehie. You saw how she was. With us. With the idea of us." 

  That was true. Daehyun had seen how the woman had acted around their group, and it was anything but civilized. Despite he was sorely tempted to do what Hyunwook did on a slightly smaller scale, Daehyun did know how teams work, and the last thing he wanted to do was to mess up Wonderland before they even started. 

  "I know, Hyunnie, I know." His fingers found the sore spot at the side of his head, and started massaging it. "But there are some things we can do, we have to do, and this is not one of them." Another sigh. "Get some sleep; we have a tough day ahead of us tomorrow. One of us needs to go to Canada, the other needs to go to Japan. Would be better if none of us keel over on the battlefield, wouldn't it?" 

  With that, Daehyun's leather clad palm found its way into Hyunwook's dark brown locks, which he ruffled affectionately. The younger boy grumbled a little at that and muttered something under his breath (probably cursing someone again, no doubt) though still obediently trudged to his room, which he entered, but soon stuck his head out and said,

  "Goodnight, Daehie." 

 


 

What's up y'all here's the long anticipated second chapter! School originally was meant to start early, around start of September but there were some hiccups along the road so ya gurl will be heading off to the UK later than expected!! Meaning there might be some chapters being yeeted out but knowing me there probably won't be any!!

At any rate I'll probably be too busy with my GCEs in mid September to update so :')

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡