behind the curtain

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Description

 naeun sees it all and she bears it. though the piercing pain in her chest, she smiles.

 

for he says, no matter how I exchange glances with someone else, there's only you in my heart.

 

 she believes him, because not believing him only makes the pain worse.

Foreword

 there's always something important hidden amongst the stars.

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daeyeol
#1
Chapter 1: You have to be kidding me.... I was so drawn towards Myungsoo and Naeun's relationship and totally didn't see that twist coming. I like it! :D You should really go proofread this when you have time because your storyline's pretty good~ Probably consider transforming it to a longer fic too, maybe? ^^ I have the feeling you have the potential to write good stories with your flow so yeah! Good job! <3
babyterry
#2
Chapter 1: It was so unexpected but I like it, especially how you incorporated the title into your stories. But I think you wrote 'reel' once instead of 'real'. It doesn't stop the flow or anthing but it just caught my eye.