The One I Love

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Jennie comes to a startling realization that the world does not revolve around her, her actions have consequences, and the boy of her dreams is in love with someone else. And that's just in one day.

Foreword

 

The one I love... doesn't love me.


 


 

inspired by: heroine shikkaku, hebi ni piasu, bokura no ita

 

 

playlist for the one i love.

 

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Gracieihunna #1
Chapter 26: So did jennie end up with mino?
Number2elf #2
Chapter 26: Sometimes I feel like you thought about what's the worst that could happen and chose that, but in a sense I feel like the fact that these negatives were never ending was a light in itself. Hayi eventually came back, jaewon did, and their parents did.
Number2elf #3
Chapter 26: Reading this was almost cathartic, but it is art.
Number2elf #4
Chapter 13: This story hurts so much to read, but I keep reading. There's so much to find out
Kuro_Wol
#5
Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Oh my dear lord I've finally caught up with everything (I've been away from aff for the longest time). Gurllll this was just so beautiful omg I'm sobbing. I tell you think every time but I really loveeee your writing style (writing goals omg Dx) and you just have such a wonderful way of story telling, it wows me every time. I loved this and how you painted each character so well, they all have their distinctive traits and I admire how you wrapped up jen's relationship with every significant character in her life, and how it impacted her and the way she viewed/felt towards things that used to hurt her in the past. As always, a wonderful, wonderful job on this hfjdjsjff pls teach me how you master all these genres senpai xD
horatia
#6
Chapter 26: It’s hard to find a good story on aff nowadays but i’m glad i stumbled on yours. I finished this story in one day, too! The ending is so painfully beautiful. Love all the deep quotes you implimented. Thank you for the meaningful life lessons you poured into a really beautiful story. And your writing style is so unique and fascinating!
alcyonne
#7
Chapter 26: The ending is so beautiful that i'm just going to be optimistic and appreciate it as it is (because beaches as endings...mean a lot of things in my experience as a reader).
i like how you tied up her relationship with hayi, hanbin, jaewon + mino. nothing was left lacking, i think what we got was enough. jennie had many potential love interests here, but in the end, mino was still the focus. i love that it wasn't necessarily love pulling them along either and i'm just happy he wasn't just brushed aside. even if jennie finally found 'the one' in hanbin (that title drop though in 24:00, i may have squealed). speaking of 24:00, 'it's everything. it's everything she has ever wanted' really hit me. god, it's all jennie really wanted that i teared up. i felt that. the closure with hayi was really enlightening. again, we get another perspective and it was interesting to hear hayi's side and the parallels between her and jennie. maybe she has a point. they weren't really that different to one another. the part with hanbin made me so ughhghfjd. hanbin in here was just literally a ray of light. that's why the part about his scarred wrists punched me in the gut , then their confessions happened and i just couldn't. this story didn't let me breathe and i love it.
ah, jaewon the psychopath. he really gone and did it lmfao. it seemed he was the one lingering around. my goodness, did he do something to his tattoo of jennie's name? wouldn't be surprised though i find myself hardly sympathetic the moment he hit her. that line she said way back, rather dying than being with him for the rest of her life got me cheering lol. he's the closest to an antagonist we'll get here (tho jennie begs to differ) and again, i applaud his character implementation. all the characters here really came alive. your writing established that with a few simple sentences and interactions and it's amazing really. this is one of the few stories i've come across that relies heavily on sub-text. that's why your word count is so low in each chapter but never lacking! this is one of my goals as a writer which is why i'm marvelled with your work. this was a pleasant read and i enjoyed re-reading sentences to figure out their true meaning. also you know a story is good when it has you thinking and everything is almost quotable, LOL.
good luck with your future endeavours/writings! thanks for the effort and time taken to write this.
it was a painful but beautiful ride. until next time!
alcyonne
#8
Chapter 20: oh my god. my heart. idk what to feel. . i'm just gonna keep reading bc if i stop now idk what i'll do ajskjsjks.