Chapter 1: I really liked the idea of this. You did a great job making the story flow and portraying the main character. The only thing that bothered me was your grammar. I know English is probably not your first language, but if you keep practicing, I know you can do it! Fighting!!!

Chapter 1: This is beautifully written ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ my heart ache how the love portrays by the character is so deep yet so ambiguous in front them </3

Chapter 1: So Jimin knew that he is her grandpa? Wow!! Bittersweet ending T.T Why can't he come with her? I am glad Jimin gave the bracelet for her to keep.

She is so pretty!

Chapter 1: Omona!!!༼♥ل͜♥༽ i would love to wake up in the past. the reality is hurt. the story between jisu and jimin would be in the history. i really love this story. great job author-nim!!
i will wait for your one shot story about bts even more!♡

Found a new one shot story bout' my second bias in bts jiminiee ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ

Chapter 1: That's a beautiful story.. I love how it the keychain pass to the future and to the right person.. Brilliant idea.. Keep writing in next and next story, I will definitely read it! Good job

I really love dark story.. It's going to be interesting.. can't wait to read it!!