this is AMAZING

Chapter 1: Oh man I need more! I was thinking there would be more!

Chapter 1: wow, i didnt expect it to end so quickly! i wasnt really expecting this to end when it did and it /was/ an open ending but you know what, i liked it! i actually liked it quite a lot :D
when yangmi showed up fly af in her flash car, she acted as a foil for us readers and compiled all our questions together which was a pretty useful summary, i must say :3 the mystery revolving around the bat legend and the fact that tao was always there at the right place and at the right time wasnt too overwhelming, thankfully, and this ended being a light, comfortable read :3

i found minseok to be rather cute in spite of his overly shy nature and what was adorable was how embarrassed he would get when tao was getting on his nerves! i admit that i found tao to be a bit... over the top, sometimes but that led to embarrassed!minseok whom i appreciated very much xD it was only in the end when the theory that probably everyone had (/coughs/ in regards to the title /coughs/) was finally confirmed and gosh, how hot tao must have looked ouo i really enjoyed the ending scene and the last line in particular~

now onto the parts that i found lacking... honestly, not much xD there werent any plot holes as far as i see? of course, thered be interest in the bat charm and how exactly it works but its not /that/ important and could easily be left for a sequel /winkwink/ the ending did sort of feel more like a chapter ending but it works as a story ending in any case~ this is exactly what a slice of life fic is supposed to be like and minseok and zitao's future can be left up to our imaginations :3
another thing, i suppose a few words here and there might have been misplaced but thats easily solved with a proofread and perhaps even a second pair of eyes? its not a huge issue anyway!
but if there is one weakness i find - and this is definitely subjective so dont worry - it might be that the actual development between minseok and zitao is very little? it seems that zitao's feelings are based on soulmate!au but i just wish we could see more of their friendship itself developing, the friendship between the potential romance, you know? :3 it sort of jumps from their meeting straight to zitao saving minseok left, right and centre xD ofc you already explained the reason behind this constant saving through zitao's revelation upon their first meeting and the bat charm but still~ i guess i just wanted the missing "cheese" to be more prevalent lol

all in all, well done! i think this might just be your best fic ^^

yay, well done on finishing this fic! i know you worked really hard on it ^^

im looking forward to yangmi jie's scenes ^^ and i also quite like the description~ "but there was more to it than just a simple belief driven by tradition" this line in particular has certainly struck my interest ouo

Chapter 1: It's pretty cute, but, I hope it's not all it is? Because there is open ending and "gruyère" and the story for now is full of holes... You mention many things which make us expect answers. The bat, the parents reactions, the feeling Minseok gave Tao, etc.

Chapter 1: AH, how to comment,

Sorry in advance, I'll be honest~ (OTL dw no hate comment)

so I'll be honest, I really have to get used to this ship (I'm a hardcore taoris shipper but it's nice trying something new once in a while)

anyways, leaving that behind,

it's new seeing Tao being this full of himself; many (as do I from time to time) portray him to be everything but this full (usually they portray him as diva-ish when they try smth like this) and think this is a nice fic for the ones that eajt to try something new~

oh I'm also curious for the sister's place in this play later and how you will work on minseok's language barrier

Woah, i think it'll be interesting XD

Omgggg~ i love crackpair^^ cant waittt

Bat???
Okay, that sounds cute ^^

Not my pairing, but why not, sounds interesting!