Orchid Story Review Shop \\ Status: Closed

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Orchid story review shop
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shop status: open
Welcome to the Orchid Story Review Shop! Thanks for checking us out! This is a one woman run shop at the moment, but I'm not opposed to having people on the team! We only review English stories at the moment; sorry for the inconvenience.
Orchid Review Shop's goal is to provide you with a way to improve your writing. We are willing to spend the time with you if you are struggling with grammar or plotline issues-- whatever the case, just contact us, and depending on the schedule, we'll help! (This, of course, will be after we review your story.)
If your story is subscribers only, don't worry about it! I'll subscribe to any story and I won't unsubscribe! I'll be there reading your next chapters! (Hwaighting! Even though I sound like a stalker while saying that ^^ XD)
Upvotes are appreciated; subscribe if you want to know when your story review is up! Also, keep subscribed until the end of the month to know if your story has won a special award!
Request Form -- To credit our shop and support us, please use our banner provided above! Thank you very much!
Story Name and Link:  
Genre:
Focus Point for Criticism: (Due to a lot of requests and processing time, please have a specific point and not just 'everything', as this takes a long time. Thanks very much!) 
Other comments: (What should I worry/ not worry about)
Are you rushed? Yes/No:
Would you like to be included in the Orchid Award? (See 'Special Awards' page on the right for more information.)
Policies: 1) On crediting: A day is given for crediting, and should be put up the day of the request. Please use the banner procvided above. Thank you for your understanding. No credit will result in blacklist.
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Multiple stories
spark931
Working On
Love Potions
deedee_zelo90
Working On
Reach
deedee_zelo90
Working On
Beast Et Beauty
Baekhyun_Biased
 
 
Budaffies of ours
DeeDee101
I sincerely apologized for being gone for too long. I promise I will try and be more active :)

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KangminBread
#1
Hey dear, I decided to start a challenge would you mind advertising it in your shop?
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1296550
Rsamara
#2
story name+link: The Disillusions of a Survivor
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1265754/the-disillusions-of-a-survivor-action-angst-mystery-psychological-romance-exo-got7

It has 12 chapters so far.

genre: action, mystery, romance

focus point: The plot line, characters and grammar.

other comments: I would like to know if my story is aconplishing to invoke emotions and questions or not. Also is it fitting into the genre it is or not. If it's too rushed or too detailed or any other negative points, I would like to know. Basically, I want to know what I should work on. Also knowing what my strong points are would help.

rushed?: Absolutely not. ^.^

orchid award?: Sure, that'd be amazing. :)

Thanks a lot though <33
Snowcakie
#3
Chapter 45: Picked up! I will credit later on tonight! Thabk you so much for the review, and I will certainly keep your comments in mind.
KangminBread
#4
hi i just noticed my name is not on the status list, just want to confirm it's being done ^^
ali060903
#5
Chapter 44: Actually, the poster I want you to review is the BubbleGum Graphicshop one, the orange, colorful one to be exact. ^^ Taht one screams fluffy and cuteness, but no wizard haha! You can tell your opinions in the comment then! And thank you so much for such a positive feedback! I didn't expect kind compliments like that! Thanks a lot for your review. ^^ I'll make sure to fix some grammatical errors and apply your tips. ^^
shesamytheu
#6
Chapter 43: Hello! I'm here for the pick-up. Firstly, thank you very much for taking some time to review my story. I know how much effort and time that takes and I'm really grateful to receive a review from you.

I've put the Taeyeon lyrics and italicized lines to the foreword! I don't see much difference but I guess it'd be great to follow your advice hahahahaha.

Maybe I should put teenage drama instead? Honestly, I'm not sure how I should tag the story. Like, I tagged it with "comedy" once but somebody said that the story wasn't funny lmao. So I removed the tag and put slice of life instead when the story has these nonsensical scenes... Do you have any suggestion on what tags I'm supposed to use for this story? I'm basing this fic on an anime and it's quite evident that the scenes are mostly following the romcom anime formula hahaha.

Yes, Kyungsoo is very flat. I'm struggling with fleshing out his character but I think that I'm getting a hang of how he's supposed to behave. Well, I hope.

I strongly agree with the flow & pacing. I do feel like nothing much happens and the scenes keep repeating themselves. This is one of the reasons why I wanted to discontinue the story lmao.

Thank you very much for the tips! I think that they're very on-point and they can definitely help me with my struggles.
KissDromedaGirl
#7
Story Name: Twinkling Lights for the Sinners

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/966878/

Genre: Tragedy, Romance, Slice of Life, Mature

Focus Point: The ending; how it flows altogether.

Other comments: This has trigger warnings, and it literally took me coming out of a dark place to complete it, which I find ironic. It's a three-shot in a way, so it's not too long. But I'd like to know if it all connects together, because sometimes I go off without noticing.

Rushed: No. Take your time, please! ^^

Would you like to be included in the orchard award? Sure?