Love sonnets

Description

Jisoo and Jin have been best friends for years but only when he’s on the verge of losing her, he realizes that they might have been in love all along.

Foreword

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“I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where. I love you simply, without problems or pride: I love you in this way because I do not know any other way of loving but this, in which there is no I or you, so intimate that your hand upon my chest is my hand, so intimate that when I fall asleep your eyes close.” — Pablo Neruda, One Hundred Love Sonnets XVII
 
Genre:
romance,
slice of life,
friends to lovers,
light angst
Word count:
4630
 
 
AUTHOR'S NOTE
I hope it won't confuse anyone but the story contains a lot of flashbacks, snippets of their past and their moments together. The above mentioned poem gave me the inspiration and I could finally write a friends to lovers story because I just love those. I hope you will enjoy reading it! ♥
 
WRITING CONTEST
The oneshot is my entry to the A Moment in Time ✩ writing contest, winning 2nd place. Check it out if you're interested in more BTS & Blackpink stories!
 
 
 
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Rotus222 #1
Chapter 1: This story is beautiful 😍😍
smilechiaki #2
Chapter 1: this is so cuteee! omgggggg! one of my favourite jinsoo stories! ❤️
asianunknown #3
Chapter 1: The last three sentences! Jisoo, I got you X))
restless_maknae #4
Chapter 1: Aww, I'm screaming!!!!! What a beautiful story! <3
First of all, it's a bonus that Jin's the main character and I don't have anything against the Jin&Jisoo ship either, so I was so curious to see how the story would go. I lowkey low friends to lovers stories and this one was definitely one of a kind. I was fond of the way we could see the progress of their relationship through the years, the flashbacks made an impressive combination with the scenes at the hospital, I really loved it! My favourite part was when Pete and Jin met and Jin was trying to kick him out with his act as Jisoo's gay best friend. Oh my gosh, I laughed so hard while reading that part. XD
I really hoped that Jisoo would wake up and I'm so glad she did. Nevertheless, I wasn't expecting to read such a lovely closing paragraph because I thought that the only connection between the title and their story was that Jin was reading sonnets for her. But I was wrong, you were so cunning but I absolutely loved that you put an end to this with this little twist. ^^
Thank you for sharing your story with us, I truly enjoyed every part of it! *-* Good luck with the contest! <3
Silver_Light #5
nicely put. truly. it brought me close to tears. and i rarely cry. i will look forward to more so be sure to write! i will wait <3 ^^
MysticExo #6
Chapter 1: It was a beautiful story indeed. I really liked how you showed their feelings and all which is very imp if you ask me. I wantes to cry-i urged to but I couldn't. This doesnt mean it wasnt a beautiful story (im just a heartless monster) i really enjoyed it. You write good i will surely check out your other stories. Write more?sorry i am just greedy. Cant find any good. If u have some recommend (baekyeon) if u can ong surry i am just desperate. Good story tho! Thumbs up!
DarkJustice #7
Chapter 1: I.think .. I am going to cry now omg. What a beautiful put story.AND I KNOW and admire how you always write um idk how to explain it but the writing is so mesmerizing? Yeah? And this was so perfecto. 10/10 for me. You really are a great author. “ψ(｀∇´)ψ i hope u win the contest? Heh
CookieDoughIceCream #8
Chapter 1: I'm gonna CRYYYYY TT that was so heartbreakingly beautiful, thank you so much!! Ahhhhh I'm dying in feels. Such a great read, omfg. Beautifully captured years worth of moments in a few snip bits and nothing about it felt rushed or awkward and just everything was so perfect! Ahhhhh
DarkJustice #9
WOMAN WHAT ARE YOU DOING THIS IS NOT WHAT I WAS EXPECTING BUT SURELY SOMETHING I WILL READ~ HWATING
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