Caramel latte and iced americano

Description

When love turns cold.

Foreword

Criticisms are welcomed.

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aiem11kueen
#1
Chapter 1: my gwad this is so sad.
so hurtful to describe with words
Jazmin8Sarina #2
Chapter 1: It's so sad but they have to do it and maybe they will come back again when they feel that they need each other. Maybe their love will come back. Thank you for writing this story:) this story is so perfectly beautiful:)
cjmoo_ #3
Chapter 1: This is beautiful ;_;
I like the whole coffee thing, it's like an apt comparison with their relationship.
I also like the minimal use of dialogue. I can literally hear the silence between them and the lull in their relationship. I think the silence really brings out the emotions well, especially with the lack of dialogue/description in the later part of the story.
Thanks for this!! :))
azure_bliss
#4
Chapter 1: What a beautiful piece!
I like how you didn't mention neither Eric nor Solar, it makes the story applicable to any shippings. :)
An advice perhaps? I think you should change the font to a more...mature one? Like Georgia, Times New Roman etc, it'll give out the angst vibe more to the readers (or at least me)
Do write more and hwaiting!
eonnifan
#5
Chapter 1: angst stories always make me cannot move on but idk... yet i like it lol
but ofc i like the happy one too hahahhaa
hope u make stories about these couple again bcz i need more hahahahhahaa
SheilaMaria #6
Chapter 1: I love this! It hurt so good. Please consider continuing this.

Thanks!
arinarayyan #7
Chapter 1: Ohh .. I got the feels ..
It didnt tugged my heart or anything like that, but my eyes just felt like crying .. I mean, is it even possible ?

I love the way you use you words and the way you build your sentence, it just send the feels in the perfect way .. I felt like maybe i should learn that from you, can i ?