Pt.2

Blue
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Warnings for this part: a few mentions of violence

It was already past ten and you walked on the dimly lit street, listening to music through your earphones. You were feeling good even after a long shift at the convenience store because hewasn’t following you tonight. No one else was around and you breathed in the chilly air with a small smile on your lips. The air smelled like spring.

You looked down at your feet and as you walked past a streetlight, you noticed a shadow not yours also appeared on the cold asphalt. You furrowed your eyebrows. 

It’s not him, is it?

You held back the urge to look back because you were afraid to face what was behind you. You cautiously removed one of the earphones from your ears and listened to the sound of footsteps. There were definitely two sounds of footsteps, both different. 

It sounded like the person walking behind you was dragging their feet, barely lifting them from the ground. The sound creeped you out enough to make you walk faster. The person behind you slowly picked up their pace too. 

Is this how I die?

The situation felt too real to be a nightmare but you still pinched yourself to check if it was a dream or not. The pinch hurt and your heart started beating even faster than it already was. 

This is real. I’m going to get kidnapped… I’m going to die…

You were brought back to reality from your thoughts when you realized the only sound of footsteps you could hear was that of yours. You slowed down you pace and eventually stopped. You turned around very slowly to see if anyone was there. 

Your heart skipped a beat when you saw two people standing between two streetlights, a little further away. They were out of light’s reach but you assumed they were both male, judging from their voices. One of them was somewhat short, the other one was tall. You walked closer to them and before you knew it, you were already only a few meters away from the two.

“What?” the shorter one asked. “I was just walking down the street.”

You looked at him and shivered a little. His clothes were worn out, his hair was a mess and his face looked scary. He had a crooked grin on his lips. 

“I should break your legs then,” the taller one said and you felt like time stopped when you heard his voice. You looked at him. You couldn’t see his face properly but you were still surprised.

He looks like a normal person…

His hair was dark - probably black - and his clothes lo

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{2018.29.12} Another quick heads-up: pt.30 is going to be really long. So... prepare yourselves! Also, I hope you don’t mind~

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Drrrrrarara #1
Chapter 31: I love this story. Thanks for making thus beautiful story
bebexol
#2
Chapter 31: Thank you for writing this amazing story! It's not often you can find a monsta x and oc story here, especially for Minhyuk.
You write so beautifully and I couldn't pull myself away from the story once I started reading! The ending was amazing to, I was praying that it would be a happy ending as I got closer tot eh last chapter and I'm so grateful that it was!
Cheesy_puff
#3
djnvjknknad this story is so good :')))))
summerxblessings
#4
[SPOILER ALERT TO ANYONE READING RIGHT NOW; don't read this comment]

So I binge-read and finished this while doing some things in between the last time I commented.

I'm satisfied with how it turned out in the end, even though I'm a little sad about the sacrifice that was made by one of the characters towards the end. I think it's a small mercy that she was able to remember him to some extent, but forget all of the other hurt. I honestly don't think it's easy to continue living with memories of so much hurt and sadness, as it was also evidently shown by some of the other characters throughout the entire story.

I might have missed this though but: what happened to Hajoon? He's a minor character but I just wonder about how he would react to all of the events....

Just another thing I wanted to point out: I really liked the relationship between Eunkyung x Yuna (romantic), and Eunkyung x reader (platonic).

Thanks so much for this story!
summerxblessings
#5
Chapter 1: Random note as I begin !!! I laughed when I read your foreword because I can read it in my own voice ?? bUT by the means of reading chapter one this looks super promising and I'll be sure to comment again as I go through this. Also since I'm annoying and I love commenting on writing style : I really like the way you describe things and I also like how mysterious chapter one is (and sets the tone for the rest of the story). You reveal quite a bit but not enough so now I want more (aka time for me to shut up and read :') )
UKISSME_SaraHwa
#6
Chapter 31: Wahhhh I love this beautiful fanfic! Finally Minhyuk & her together TT_TT
PuffTedEBear
#7
Chapter 30: Woah, I did not see that coming. Self sacrifice for a loved one is always hard to bear. Thank you for the update!!
UKISSME_SaraHwa
#8
Chapter 29: Omgggg. I hope shes okay. Huhuhu
xxiceyxx
#9
Chapter 28: NOOOOOOOOOOO OMGGGGGGGGGG WHYYYY AHHHHH
omgggg this story is seriously so good!!! I just found it last night and read all of it up and until now. Please keep up the great work!! I can't wait to read the next part