Stranded

Description

This is the story of six friends whose fate leads them to go on a boat trip together to celebrate the graduation of two friends. After a stormy night, Johnny, Ten and Jaehyun find themselves stranded on an island. There are no signs of their three other friends who were with them on the boat. Now, they have to figure out how to get back home, however, before doing so, they must survive the island first while trying to maintain the friendship they have worked so hard to build.

 

Foreword

F O R E W O R D

T R I P P I N G - P A N D A

 

This story is about one year old. I got inspired by an assignment in a 4th grader's book when working as a substitute teacher.
It was EXO at first, but then I stopped writing, I couldn't find a way to continue and lately I picked it up but changed it into NCT. 

Here we have... I think it's my first main!Johnten story besides Click. It has always been side!Johnten.
We also have Jaeyong and well... can't say much more. I don't want to spoil.
(And and and, Johnny is mostly the main yiiiiir)

I hope you will enjoy it! <3

 

Other NCT stories:

Frost | Knowing | DamnedLet's Go Further | When We Fall | Caught | Ghostly | Taken | At Dawn | Click

 

THE STORY HAS BEEN REVIEWED BY COSMOS REVIEW SHOP (sekaimi)
- I really appreciate the review, gave me a lot of great insight on how I can improve as a writer. 
Thank you so much! <3

 

 

Tripping-Panda
STRANDED; I have removed Subs Only, so that everyone (even visitors) can read this story, but I also hope that it's good enough so that people want to leave a comment! Feedback is very appreciated even if the story is completed!! <33

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niwo-chan #1
Chapter 22: totally did not stay up way into the middle of the night to finish reading one of your stories. ⚆ _ ⚆

I love your stories <3
Wildflower8
#2
😪Bringing me back to Lord of the Flies
real_kkabsong
#3
Chapter 20: Im scared that they wont make it out alive. Nsnshsbwnw
real_kkabsong
#4
Chapter 14: T-T
real_kkabsong
#5
Chapter 13: Omggg, things are getting out of hand. Jshsbdh
real_kkabsong
#6
Chapter 4: This story is my new addiction. I love ittt
taempteng
#7
Chapter 21: Hngg
This
Wow
Hmm
Give me a moment-

Okay, this didn’t give me as much emotions as When We Fall and Wolf Gang had, but still
Damn
The ending was just as impactful and saddening
I like how a lot of your thriller/action stories end in bittersweet notes. There are sadness, but there’s also hints of hope. When Aunt Brooke came to pick Johnny up, I couldn’t help but to feel happy and be amused that she brought banana milk to greet him, it’s just so heartwarming, ughh
No one knows what happened to TY. He could be dead by now, or he could’ve survived but barely, or came out triumphant. Either way, he had been left behind so the initial three could escape. Now I understood why, even though TY had survived too, only Johnny, Ten and Jaehyun were on the cover. Bc in the end, it is these three that would make it out alive, harmed but at least to safety. TY’s fate lies in the imagination of the readers.

I love this story <3 It’s very exhilarating reading this and I couldn’t stop reading the next chapter, wanting to know more of what happened and needing answers to my questions. I enjoyed reading this story a lot and all I could say is, great job on yet another amazing story! You truly deserve a gold medal for your writing. Honestly, more people should read your fics, they’re just so amazing!
taempteng
#8
Chapter 20: Anddd, the truth will never come out
Oof
And Jaehyun even hit my baby for being terrified of what TY might’ve done to Johnny
I love you Jaehyun but, just this once, why can’t you let my baby Ten strangle the living daylight out of TY? He deserved it-

But anyway, THEY’RE GOING BACK HOME SOON, YESSS!!
taempteng
#9
Chapter 19: W he e z e s
Ten t r i e d to hide the truth about TY
But I guess the misunderstanding was the last straw
He probably thought TY done it again and just went berserk mode
After holding back the truth, maybe he would spill the beans now
Maybe

But anyway
I can’t believe Ten actually kept quiet about what really happened to him to Jaehyun
Maybe he knew how much TY meant to him, that’s why he kept silent
Oorz, either way, the truth was so close to revealing itself to Johnny, so close-

I wonder what will happen to Johnny now? He’s still at the plane! But TY came back first
taempteng
#10
Chapter 18: [squints at TY]
I d a r e you!!

Maybe Johnny had realised what really went down at that cliff, how Ten found himself on the ground all battered up and what could’ve caused all that e. He probably had a gut feeling but wasn’t able to pinpoint the exact process of the event, like how it happened and stuff. He only realised it with TY’s odd behaviour and the way he extended his arm, but there’s also the possibility he still didn’t get what the other’s intention and is still trying to figure out what’s going on.

Either way, DON’T YOU DARE DO IT, TY!!