RAIN

Description

Hyung, it's raining again.

Foreword

Hi~

This is my very first fanfic so yeah um I'd love it if you'd comment about it so I'd know how to improve <3

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stupideas
#1
Chapter 1: again, this one was breathtaking too. you seem to love rain, and the way you describe each sensation donghyuck felt is beautiful! i'm not fond of rain, always thought it was too messy though kind of romantic, but now i'd wish to experience what they had under the rain. on a side note, can you correct that small typo after the first break. it kind of broke the flow of the story for me, maybe because it's my bias' name? lol. hope you'd write more stories in the future! i'll be looking forward to whatever you publish. ^^
Baozitu_Yongie #2
Chapter 1: Wooooahhhh!!!! U blew me away!!!!.....phaiting phaiting!!!..waiting fo the next fic impatiently!!!....from taeyong's lobster..
RiceOpenerAeri #3
Chapter 1: I criedddddd
arizee #4
Chapter 1: Its really sad... i love it.. makes more markhyuck angst juseyo <3