Dying Embers

Description

Life is a gift given. Life is a curse attained. Luhan was given life but was also deprived of the chance of living that life. Kris was given life but wished nothing but to end that life in exchange of someone else's. Time plays its role and the space between the two diminishes. They find compromise, but that compromise leads to a chaos. 

In the midst of that chaos, their hearts beat as one.  

Foreword

Warnings: The story contains themes such as war, murder, death and attempted suicide.

I'm not quite knowledgable when it comes to history (in fact, I'm an absolute idiot when it comes to that) so none of the events in the story are historically correct, unless I make a lucky guess or something. 

The story takes place in Tianchao, which is a name I just randomly picked because I like its meaning. In the story, it is said to be located near the ocean but in reality, I really don't know where it is located. (please excuse me, you're dealing with not just a dumb author but a lazy one too) 

Even with all these, (and many more historically incorrect events and facts) I hope you enjoy and focus on the story. 

Disclaimer: The characters and names in the story do not belong to me. Luhan belongs to himself and Kris is Kris. Even the places are not mine. The only thing that belongs to me is the plot. 

Thank you, you 

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Lacorice
#1
Chapter 2: Authornim... I AM SO SORRY FOR NOT NOTICING THIS STORY SOONER ( ཀ ʖ̯ ཀ) This is one of the best stories I've read so far! I love how Luhan's like Daenerys the unburnt from Game Of Thrones! (considering the prologue where he comes to life after thrown in the fire, AND unhurt) I just love the plot and everything in this story, you have a creative imagination! (☞ ͡ ͡° ͜ ʖ ͡ ͡°)☞ Just letting you know. Listening to "time after time" while reading this had me some anime vibes, I really hope you continue on writing this fic! Having an overprotective father such as Luhan's father in this fic gave me a big impact, like wow, I can't even portray how to make one of those myself. Just how Yifan appears all of a sudden in the fic, but it's a good start, I'm a new writer myself xD Still haven't published mine though, so I can say that I'm still learning. But seeing your vision and how you write, it's a style of an expert, reminds me of Chrysallion's (yeah, I should thank her for advertising this fic) and I really hope you continue on with this fic, authornim! You have my best regards!
shirokuroi #2
Chapter 2: Love this!
Mochi__ #3
Chapter 2: Wow! I'm loving everything so far >w<
teufelchen_netty #4
Chapter 2: i am curious how you will write ongoing xD
teufelchen_netty #5
Chapter 1: Good start, liked it. It's something new
Mai_Faj #6
Chapter 1: THIS IS INSAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANE but interesting .-.

Still... The part how Luhan dies tho :V WHY?!?!? = ^ =
KSJJ014 #7
Chapter 1: The story is interesting so far and I like the way you write, please update soon!