Line 4

Description

Minseok rides train line number 4 every day after work.

Foreword

title: Line 4
rating: PG (epilogue NC17)
pairing: luhan/xiumin
word count: 4792
summary: It's become a routine for him.

 

 

 

 

 

 

another somewhat abstract fic, but not as vague as Myriad. I just thought of it while listening to music two days ago so I wanted to get it out there.

 

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wadi_hots #1
Your stories is really great. Can you grant me an access please. My id is wadi_hots. Thank you so much you're really amazing.
FlowerBaozi
#2
Chapter 2: Wow! This is amazing! What a way to write a story! Nice twist. Reminds me of Lake House movie, just with a different twist. I wish there’s more on this story though, see if there’s a way for them to be really together. But all in all, this was great!
ratuuu
#3
Chapter 2: Hye.. I want to continue reading this story in dreamwidth.. Can u grant me access? My id is ratuuu.. N I love this story!!
hamstree_baodeer
#4
Chapter 2: It's so beautiful... i'm crying with Minseok here...

But, since the conductor Luhan aren't for this Minseok, then what about the one that know him back in crowded station? The one who called him, i mean. Is that possible he's Minseok's? He called and asked Minseok to not leave him again. Or he just lost his Minseok and ask the other one as he saw him? I kept wondering...

But after all, you really great at describing your fantasises, even the hot one ♨♨♨
MikaLovesXiumin
#5
Chapter 1: This was so beautiful...
xingthighs
#6
Chapter 2: Holy this is so creative and beautifully written bravo! I absolutely love the plot and it made me feel as if I was there with Minseok on his travels~ And I'm sure the rest of the epilogue is great considering everyone's comments
KimKimSumire
#7
Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Omg I felt so sad and emotional towards the end TT Luhan is meant for Minseok :'(
I'm so glad you're back!!! And this final chapter was so HOT!! I had to stop reading for a few seconds at >> “Lift your hips more—I want to see.” ...fffff. The mental image. I literally covered my eyes with my hands bjtfKGDGBXSG I HAD TO COLLECT MYSELF BEFORE CONTINUE READING. You make me feel things you know.. :D and I wasn't used anymore to read amazing Xiuhan , it's been a while! You fed me so well now :') Thanks for this beautiful update <3 I really loved 'Line 4' and I'm glad it's complete now! I hope to see you soon!! :)
lucky_s
#8
Chapter 2: It's already 1 year rt ? Wow.... Thanks for the update :)
annimaus
#9
Chapter 2: Well.... that was ...mmmh.... HOT! I hope Minseok will find his love soon....
Welcome back! It’s always a great pleasure to see that you wrote something new! Although I have to admit that I reread your stories again and again to keep me entertained until you updated a new masterpiece! A devoted fan? 100% for sure!!!!! See you!