Chapter 2: I love the dynamics between Jin and Yoongi -I found it so hilarious that Yoongi was the "most handsome one", but of course he is, it's just that it sounds so fun that it's Jin who thinks that and gets pissed off by it haha I love how ill tempered Jin is here, I can totally pitcure him going all red and argumentative. But it fits so well, because Jin is passionate and all-out-there, while Yoongi is soothing and assertive. They work so good, I really love how you create your characters -as if I haven't said it enough already hahaha
I really want to see how the investigation unravels and if there will be overlapping of the cases -since you're talking about four different murderers at the same time, I wonder how you'll work with them simultaneously.
It's kind of odd to see the "villain's" side for me. On one hand, I love seeing into the mind of -in this case- Chanyeol and getting to understand his motivations and the way he analyses his own actions. But on the other hand, I wonder (or worry, maybe?) how giving pov to the murderer will affect the "suspense" or "mystery" of the plot. It might not be a "mysterious" story, but there's is a puzzle game the detectives have to solve -so, I'd have to read more to see how you manage to pull this off.
Great work! I love it!

I can't say that I'd be able to offer any sort of constructive criticism as I myself am really not much of a writer but I want you to know that this is by far one of my favorite stories on this site even with just two chapters!

Chapter 2: I'm still feeling this story out, but the theme really interests me. I'm also willing to try anything that you write. I don't have a tumblr, but I've been following since the dqy days. Happy writing and thanks for sharing your creativity with us, I know how daunting that can be at times.