Distant Orbs

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'I want every piece of me to crash into every piece of you,
I swear to god that's how they make stars.'
- Mary Lambert

 

 

 

Foreword

LA drabble for a contest. Click the banner for the contest details:) Come join too

I dont plan to win tbh, i just love writing but writing doesn't love me back. T_T

but I'll try, try and try some more until it does. 

And im a yoonmin trash, so yeah..

and I may or may not add some drabble about this story please subscribe if you like it. I want to write something when they're still at college and one when they finish college. I just loooove yoonmin childhood au. 

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makeupyourmind #1
Chapter 1: I really enjoyed this drabble! the grammar is not perfect in this but it still really gets to me in the heart :) I liked how you tied in the stars at the beginning of the piece and then again in the end, it worked to mould the whole piece together very well (and made good use of the prompt!) Another thing i was impressed with is how you are able to express Jimin's world and what Yoongi meant to him in such a short space in time.
Kathys #2
Chapter 1: I don't really read Yoonmin but this was really too cute. I especially loved the ending and the whole scene with the stargazing! *-*
cheery45 #3
Chapter 1: That was very very heart warming haha!
Congratulations! I loved it!
CupOfHotChocolate #4
Chapter 1: That's truly wonderful! I want more authornim!
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