The Collector

Description

Lee Hoya woke up several times with an alcohol bottle in his hand, and no memories of the previous night.
When he starts exploring for unobtained answers, he wished he hadn't.

Foreword

My attempt at dark romance that is different from my other mystery thriller stories such as Hidden in Plane Sight or House of Trap. 
This was also written for my dear friend infinfic. I know you probably wanted a fluffy story, but I haven't been in a fluffy mood, so this is what you get~ XD
I reaaalllyyy hope you'll like it. Thank you to everyone for giving this attempt at dark romance a chance~ <3
 

Submission for:
Seasonal Swirl Writing Contest
A Freedom Writing Contest
Dusk 'Til Dawn


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wuiting #1
Chapter 1: An excellent story about how love can turn into complicity.
I like how you can highlight the emotions, feelings and thoughts of the husband and wife very well.
Good job!
kimsfangirl #2
Chapter 1: So... In the end, is his wife also put in a cage or... what?
dearho_ #3
Chapter 1: God, this's so unexpected!!! KYAAA LOVE THIS SO MUCH ❤ it's kinda hard to find a story like this one, I hope you write more story like this^^
Hime_1 #4
Chapter 1: OMG!!!!!! That was beyond AWESOME!!!
I really really loved this one even more than any multi chaptered story.

It was all pure mystery and dark, and how the two main characters were reacting.. how Biah wanted to protect him was all just beautiful and great to read.
Maybe they had to kill all the hostages in the end in order to keep the secret for themselves! though the police may find out about them. Anyways, anything to keep them together.

I can't explain how much I loved this.. really! You should write more of it please, I'm dying to find such stories :(
contaminated #5
Chapter 1: OH MY GOD THAT WAS UNEXPECTED
I thought, ah... Biah was jealous and killing people
BUT NOOOOOOO
IT WAS HOYA FROM THE START
IT WAS HIM ALL ALONG, TORTURING AND HURTING PEOPLE
(my poor jongie ;n;)
hellioness #6
Chapter 1: So, this is kinda like Jekyll & Hyde inspired eh? Reading this gives me goosebumps and I'm afraid that I might get nightmare later, oh gosh. You're so good in plot twist, most of your thriller stories have different touch of plot twists and it's very mind blowing! I'm so looking forward to your future thriller stories.
red_knight #7
Chapter 1: OMG I'M BLAMING BIAH FOR ALMOST THE WHOLE STORY. IT'S COMPLETELY PLOT TWIST! ! I LIKE THIS~~~
julyana23 #8
Chapter 1: Loving the plot twist!!! I like how the story flows and eventually giving the end a punch which you would least expected :))
banana-nim #9
Chapter 1: It is definitely good and I actually thought Hoya's drunk state was suspicious at the beginning plus Bi Ah's personality; she's nice and soft but that made me thinking like "hell, she's a creep" but didn't expect the twist on Howon :D
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