Chapter 2: WOW!!! :O That was all I could muster after reading the continuation of the story because it was just... wow! ^^
It was exceptionally good and I wouldn't think that you could write something even better than His story but Her story was a masterpiece as well. *-* Even by itself, it was so catchy, emotional and beautifully-written, I seriously saw the whole thing in front of my eyes. It was like a movie playing in my head, I could picture the exhibition, Taehyung holding her in his arms and praying for her to be alive just for another second. It must have been terrifying and sorrowful for both of them to endure that she had to die again and again, in order to be with him.
I just loved the whole idea, the whole setting and again, you did something that no one had done before! Thank you for sharing it with us and congratulations on winning the contest! I know you could do it! ;)
Thank you and take care! <3
Chapter 2: Darling,
What a perfection! I loved every single word of it and the whole chapter was even more loveable than the previous one. When Tae couldn't save her despite his power the only thing I could think was: well... how sad that the resuscitation is God's privilige. :'( Thank you for writting this masterpiece. You're amazing as always and congratulation for the first place <3 this whole thing deserves this *o*
Love you xx
I don't know if you did this intentionally or by accident but I really like how the title could mean two things! "Destined to fall" as in Taehyung falling literally from heaven or fall as in Taehyung falling in love with the girl). It's really neat and clever and I'm a er for good titles!
The piece is short but you were really able to create a vivid and colourful world within such a short amount of words. And you didn't just tell us about Taehyung's past, you also explained why he chose the path that he did. It makes Taehyung's character a lot richer and more relatable (despite being the devil).
You know what parts to emphasize and I feel there is not a wasted sentence within the drabble. And that is not easy to do. I was looking for a lasting impression and you really nailed that down.
I also feel like the whole piece was very poetic in a sense and the imagery was done very well. Some of my favourite parts: "He had to watch her wither again and again and a part of him died with her every time", "Like moths were drawn to flame even though it burnt them, she was pulled closer to him by a magnet stronger than gravity", "Nobody loved devil better than her" and "her whisper was a soothing cure for all his torment."
All in all, thank you for the great read! :)
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