Chapter 6 pt.1

The Creatures
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When my eyes closed, I felt my conscience leaving me. Everything went completely silent and my body heavily fell to the ground. When I woke up, I was floating in a golden light, which I could perceive behind my closed lids. In that moment, all the fear and the anger had disappeared, I felt safe and peaceful. “The time has come for you to discover the truth,” a soft woman voice spoke. “We need you.” My mouth didn’t open, but then my own voice resonated as I thought, “What is the truth? I’m scared.” “Don’t be, sweetheart.” I immediately recognized that voice. I tried to open my eyes but my lids felt heavy and my body wouldn’t answer my will. “Eomma?! Is it really you? I want to see you!” “I’m sorry, baby, you can’t see me. But don’t be afraid, you are not alone. I'm always watching over you, and they will always be by your side.” “Who?” “They are waiting for you. Now you have to go back.” Her hand caressed my cheek sweetly. “Yong Gi, Mom loves you.” Before I could reply anything, my mind once again drifted away.     I came back to my sense in a warm and comfortable bed. There was a nice scent of flowers, leaves and soil, and behind the four voices talking around me I could hear birds chirping blithely. “How did the deity know?” asked an unknown voice with a foreign accent, so deep that it felt like you could drown in it. “He must’ve feel it from their meeting.” Then that was Yoon Gi’s lazily low voice. “When she controlled the words?” This was Nam Joon’s deep and soothing voice. “I did feel it too.” And the last voice was one I had briefly heard some time ago: the Elf, Seok Jin. They stopped speaking when my eyes slowly fluttered open, and the faces of the three young men bent over mine with an expecting expression. “I’m awake,” I informed them weakly as I sat up, mind still a bit misty. My head felt heavy. I lifted an hand to grab it, frowning as an headache appeared. “What happened?” Nam Joon explained, “The corrupted deity, Fyhdohr, absorbed a big portion of your Maryeok; making you faint. Then the Deity of the Sky, Na'Il, moved you to a parallel space. You came back when Fyhdohr had run away.” I recalled what that… I didn't even know how to call him… But I recalled really well what he had done. And so much anger filled me that I had the impression that I could implode. That-! “Bastard! I’ll tear his head off the next time I see him!” exclaimed Nam Joon. His fists balled and his eyes took a fierce glint; angels can be a lot more dangerous than you imagine. “You’ll have to dismember him,” I said, attracting surprised glances from the men. “He was the one who… murdered… all these innocents…” Of course, silence followed. “Did he also murdered Creatures?” then lowly asked Seok Jin, as if he was afraid of the answer. I nodded affirmatively, and a tch left Yoon Gi’s lips; his way of expressing the anger and the shock we were all feeling. In another, longer and deeper silence, we had a thought, or a prayer, or both, for the victims- if there was anything I could do, I was convinced that I should. And I would. Speaking up again, I grabbed the water glass that was waiting on the night stand, “Aren’t Deities forbidden from using their powers for personal reasons or to get involved with Earth matters?” “They are,” answered Nam Joon. “But Na'Il stepped in because someone asked her to. And she accepted to do that person a favor, as a strict exception,” announced Seok Jin, sitting back in the chair behind him. The elf was next to Nam Joon, and the latest looked unsatisfied by his intervention. “He’s right,” added Yoon Gi. “But-” “Tell me,” I then interjected. My guardian ran an hand through his hair and took a long breath, “It won’t be easy, Yong Gi,” he warned. “It seems like there are a lot of things that won’t be easy. But I want to know.” The things Fyhdohr told me hint at an unimaginable story… “Fine. That person Na'Il accorded a favor to was a man. He is an angel known as Sung Yoon. He-” “My Dad is alive?! Can I meet him??” I felt like I could jump straight up to Heaven. “He is. But you can’t meet him. I’m sorry,” he apologized sadly. I shook my head; it wasn’t his fault. Thinking about Dad brought me to think about Mom. The memory of her soft voice rang in my head, the feeling of her hand caressing my cheek grazed my skin. I couldn’t hold back the tears that had appeared in my eyes and the salty pearls slowly rolled down my cheeks. “My… My Mom was in that parallel space too…” Nam Joon was taken aback. “Are you sure? It’s… supposed to be impossible,” he interrogated, wiping the water on my face with his sleeve. “Yeah, I’m sure.” How could I forget that? It had been nine years. I hadn’t heard her voice for nine years. “But I couldn’t see her. I think I wasn’t allowed to since she’s…” I paused. “Wait… Na Young? Where is she?!” I almost jumped out of the bed but Nam Joon was faster to put his hands on my shou
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cheonchoni
#1
Chapter 30: Damn nayoung...that was so easy. Good for you :(
cheonchoni
#2
Chapter 26: Glad the conflict didnt last long
cheonchoni
#3
Chapter 25: I had this thought that there might be some plot twist that the guy she liked is one of the companion!! I was right?! WAIT. HE IS A CELESTIAL? SHE DATED A CREATURE BEFORE SJDNJS WHAT. Is that why he 'left' her?? Wait but its not sure yet in this chapter...so yeah i will read the next chapter.
cheonchoni
#4
Chapter 24: This is my first comment after more than halfway through the story hehe. I just want to say i really enjoyed reading this. Your writing style is neat and simple. Not too simple tho, the amount of explanation is just right.
And yes, we love to see some progression with yoongi lol
ChaMinRa
#5
Chapter 33: I just finished this story. I love it very much!!
Can't wait to read your other stories. Fighting!!
dhruva1611 #6
Chapter 22: Here comes my kookie
dhruva1611 #7
Chapter 18: My Tae Tae
janelle15 #8
Chapter 34: Omg. Hello fellow army tho~ thank you for writing this story and answering our questions!!! We would love to hear more from you !!! Plus thank you for the additional infos at the end, it did help tho. And some of them are quite funny. ^o^ Fighting and i will look forward to your future stories!!!

P. S. The teaser is oh so idk. Ddaeng is shaking. ≧∇≦
Fighting again and more ideas to come.!!!
Isolemlysweariloveme #9
Chapter 34: Wow I didn’t expect to be nominated into anything :’) I just wanted to let you know I’ve been enjoying this story and even if I’m sad it ended I’m glad it happened. Thank you!
JazzOnTheRoof
#10
Chapter 34: I'm touched TT
But no, really.......