my immortal

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Chaerin x Jiyong

"when you cried i'd wipe away all of your tears.

when you'd scream i'd fight away all of your fears.

and i held your hands through all of these years.

but you still have all of me"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5anLPw0Efmo

 

Foreword

don't mind about time in each chapter because there would be flashback after flashback or flashback in flashback. but don't forget that jiyong is four years old older than chaerin. n please mind the italic words which is like a hint for the story that follows n listening to the song while reading would creat the mood, it's evanescence my immortal

another new idea came to mind, again! bear with my long waited update please. once again english is not my first language so there would be mistakes here n there. i hope you will understand, but i mostly hope you will understand the story hahaha.

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Sweet_Alyssum #1
Chapter 12: I've never seen that coming tho, honestly I dislike Ji in here for being such a dickhead for constantly thinking Chae is being childish and immature. The problem is that Ji, you made her feel that way and as a wife Chaerin needs assurance from his man. Actions sometimes are not enough and so does words, if the situation were handled first-hand then the consequences wouldn't turn into a disaster and full of regrets.


And back to the inspiration behind the story, I'd say it's well thought.
babyda91 #2
Chapter 12: I cannot give you upvote before..but now here i am again to give you one after done read again..will come again tho.
syeda_fz #3
Chapter 12: The*$#+??? I hate sad endings!!! Damn poor CL is always in pain!!!
babyda91 #4
Chapter 10: And yess Jiyong so cruel & selfish how could he is not even once say 'i love you' bfore. Then Chae continue suffer T^T until the END
babyda91 #5
Chapter 12: I hate youuuu
babyda91 #6
Chapter 12: OMGGGGGGGGGGG
blackwonderer #7
Chapter 12: Now if you understand the lyric, i'm sure u will get why i put the ending this way. As i Said please mind the lyric because those would tell how the story goes. Thank your for your support till now. I hope u will appreciate this story even though it's So far from perfect. Hope u had a good time reading this, n see u in my other stories if u would gladly read them ^^
babyda91 #8
Chapter 8: Omg Jiyong such a dickhead. I hate him. He so selfish, put Chae for granted only. Told Chae to wait but he play as much as he want. Chae better for someone else! >_<
Vivianv96 #9
Chapter 7: Omg update soon
DJ_GONG #10
Chapter 5: Ugggghhhh..... I hate this side of Jiyong.... bunnyboy a.k.a playboy... poor Chae eomma T.T
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