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Beta-reader: previously proof-read by leebeelin, but I revised the story again and proof-read myself orz. Thank you for your hard work nonetheless!

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Review: ʕ ᓀ ᴥ ᓂ ʔ K U M A 2.0 (by asianh3r0) (57/100)

Review: SIMPLICITY - - - (by jennay523) (ungraded)

"The only thing I’ll put in this section is that there were a few grammatical issues that could be revised, but other than that, I enjoyed your story."

Review: Cosmos Review Shop (by sekaimi) (ungraded)

"To be honest, I couldn’t really get an image of Minah’s character, but I did with Jungkook’s."

Review: BLK's Review (by -Vminatic) (72/100)

"Jungkook, however, you developed his character very well. Though he was confusing at times, you gave him a lot of character and I liked it.
I felt like it was moving too quickly... Maybe if you had written this as a one shot, you would be able to develop the characters and story further and more in-depth. While reading your story, I often get lost and confused. Your flow never stayed constant and it confused me a lot.
I have not seen plots like yours so kudos to you for that!
I felt that your narration wasn't very well done. From how you did not develop the characters enough to how you were unable to describe without causing confusion.
You narration didn't go in-depth into both the characters and the story. Overall, I felt that the story was just 1-Dimensional. You had too many dialogues which I felt could be cut down.
Your storyline was interesting up overall."

Review: ODD REVIEW (~53/100)

"Can't disregard that she's a very flawed character which it is very nice to see in a story.
The pacing of the story was too quick for me, I felt off tune with the characters feelings and they fell in love in two days..."

Review: ♚ Hope to The End ♔ MULTI SHOP (78/100)

"The title is unique as it has a coulour of its own. The word "game" has been used often in aff but you fave it a new spin.
Gotta say though they're both hot-headed and that is quite a combination.
The plot is uncommon, which stood out to me the most. I really like the idea especially the 'genie in the bottle' theme.
The short paragraphs made me dizzy and confused, I couldn't focus on what was going on.
 I really like the theme of the story but the storyline is a bit too cheesy for me."

Review: ~_AMATEURS_~ [A MULTI-SHOP] (86/100)

"WOW! It’s very unique. I haven’t seen many GENIE!AU stories out there, so this was refreshing, however, it’s kind of confusing."

Review: 《 skye trails。》- reviews & ads.  (ungraded)

"Your plot is very unique. I haven’t seen a lot of Genie!AU stories around this site for a while so I find the story fresh and lovely.
Jungkook is such a mischievous little guy, while Minah is also rather cute and I love the dynamics between the two.
A side concern, however, is whether you will develop a love line between the two, because I felt that they would match better in a sibling-like relationship than that of lovers."

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