Chapter 1: The first yuri fics ever in my life XD I love how you described about Jung Hee's perspective towards homouality, and also how she dealed with it when she about to realize that she had developed some feelings towards Min Jung. The latter's appearance almost tricked me that something is going to happen but you wrapped it up well. And so did Tae Yeon. I can say that Tae Yeon is quite a scene stealer here and I want to know more about their development in characters. Since this is a contest participation, I can say that you did quite well to carry out a heavy topic. Yup, most societies are against homo and so do me, personally, but after reading your story, I can say that maybe I'll try to be open up and accept this kind of uality. Glad that there's no typical in here. XD

Chapter 1: minji... oh my goodness... this was absolute perfection! i loved it from start to finish ; u ; this whole universe youve written is so creative and i love some of the place names ouo i found it really amazing how junghee was a single, independent lady who was boss af and i was cheering her on all the way like "mhm, you go, gurl *snap snap*" xD the mentions of the misogynistic society honestly but i get it and how crucial it is to the plot u.u i loved how junghee was like defying norms by being the top chick and then by being a les <33 like yeeeesh! minjungs entrance couldve gone so wrong and been awkward but you made it smooth and i found myself shipping them right from the get-go ouo there doesnt need to be magic or fireworks~ it was already special enough ; u ; you wrote this so brilliantly that despite being a dystopic fic, i was able to mentally picture every single little detail with little difficulty and im honestly just so proud of you <3 and another thing (im so full of compliments for this masterpiece muehehe) the ending was just so wonderfully concluding~ you didnt need to add any more at all because i feel like all the strings were nicely tied and the story was done being told ^^ you go win that contest! /pumps fist in the air

Omg! I don't read yuri but i had to say it's a good read. I didn't read the foreword at first so when it turns out her significant other was the same gender, I was quite surprised. There are not many fics (in fact i haven't found any at all) about homouality that taps on how the society is going against them, I'm glad I finally found one. Though I would've liked to find out what will happen to them after

Chapter 1: Ooh, I like it... I like how it's in Junghee's perspective.. The storyline is well developed too.. Thanks for an interesting story, Author-nim.. Good luck with entering this story.. Fighting!!!