Pray Before We Fall

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             "Here take this - Boys.. We need to fight. You ready to skydive?"

                Don't think. Don't breathe. Don't run, we'll find you with loaded guns on our hips, and hands itching to kill.

             There is group of boys that are outlawed. They are the most feared boys of South Korea. They go by name of 'PRAY'. They was all orphaned kids that was taken in after their parents was brutally murdered. Now, they roam the street's seeking revenge for all the people that never helped them. Such as the FBI, even the secret under FBI agents. Now, there is a huge war between them and the people in undercover. They won't stop until they get full revenge. That is until one fatal girl is forced into going into undercover and joining the gang, will they figure it out or will they take her in fully? 

 

                   


           I need to keep quiet, my name is Mika. I'm undercover for my father, we are looking for the people who killed my mother. There is claims that they are a famous outlawed group of boys; about ages ranging from 16 to almost 18. We have been tracking them for a few years now, and now I can finally avenge my mother.

                Everbody wants to seek revenge. I won't stop until all of them are dead, I will kill them slowly. Make them suffer, but first, I got to gain their trust. I will join them as a boy, and I will be their most loyal member. I will die for my mother, or go down in history. Make sure you pray for me.

 

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                    'Snap.'

"I - I do not know what you're talking about man."

 There was a middle aged man tied up to a rugged and old chair, blood trickling down his face. Along the ally way streets was droplets of blood, from deep gash's in his wrist. The wooden chair was soaked to the bone, but it didn't block out the shadow's the loomed over him. 'click' Was the only sound heard as the gun loaded rapidly before the silver tip was aimed at his face. 

"Again, Jongup."

A deep voice snarled, before the shadow crossed over his musuclar chest. The man screamed in terror as a bullet sped straight to his face after there was a blast of red and orange. silence. The man stopped screaming and was slumped over in a fetel position. Blood trickled down his face, staining his ruined and un-fixed business tux.

Against him was a black leather suitcase drenched in the man blood. Along the edge it read:

'Top Secret. Only the FBI May Associate With This Suitcase

The boy named Zelo with a skeleton facial mask picked it up, his dark eyes narrowed into slits as his brother, Jongup, cleaned off his bloody pistol that was stained at the end with a dark blooded end, tinted with the mans blood.

"Yongguk, we got the wrong one. What if he was looking for Mrs. Lee?"

Himchan voiced, grabbing the rope and antifreeze off the ground with both bloodied knuckles. All the boys faced their gang leader at once, their face covered by the illuminated street lights that flickered ahead above them.

Yongguk, the gang leader, cleared his throat before looking to his right at a deformed body of a women. She put up a fight, that's for sure, but she wasn't no match for the boys. Around her finger was a bloodied wedding band. Her black long locks hung in her bruised and busted face, matching the ones on their's as well.

Jongup bent over, plucking the ring off her finger before catching it in the air, making a 'ding.'

"Then we better be careful. Her family will be after her soon. To bad she didn't save us when we was younger. Revenge sure is a , hm?"

The boys all laughed in agreement, before freezing as the blue and red lights of a cop car danced along their pale but yet bloodied faces. They all geared up, grabbing pistols and switchblades.

"Get em boys."

Yongguk commanded after pickng up his huge FBI loaded gun. With that said, the boys launched into action as gun shots exploded the scene.


 

Foreword

Name: Jongup

Age: 16

Personality: He's not the leader, but he definately acts like one. He doesn't care what anybody says, he does things his way. He is also one of my most hardcore and most wanted out of the group. His tongue is very sharp, and he doesn't care about anyone except his group and brother (Zelo). Honesty is the most biggest thing about him, he doesn't care what or how anybody feels, he will say whatever is on his mind by far. Even though he is mean and role, he can be super kind hearted too

 Brother: Zelo 

Role in Gang: Second In Command

Zelo:

Age: 16 

Personality: Hes one of the most loyal person in the group. Him and his brother are always making them both alot. He isn't a softy at all, and he isn't afraid to kill. He is one of the most feared people in the group. Even though he can vary. He is mainly quiet and doesn't really open up to anybody or anyone, even to his gang. He's a major bad boy, and will always have his brother's back. Even though he appears really violent and mean, he can be sort of a kid by heart. He's well hiddden inside.

 Brother: Jongup

Role In Gang: Lead Assasinator 

Name: Yongguk

Age: 17 

Personality: He's mainly the more cold hearted person in the group. As the leader, he has to make the major calls. He's also the big brother of the group. He doesn't mind killing, and he doesn't mind gambling with his life on the line. Many people know who he is, and is scared to utter his name. The only good side of him is his gang and group, he could care less about anyone else. Deep down, he can be a pretty reasonable person. His trust is something he holds onto, he's a loyal friend.

Best Friend: Daehyun 

Role In Gang: Leader

Name: Daehyun

Age: 17 

Personality: He's the more calm and collected one. He's also the leaders right hand man, and doesn't let anything or anyone get in his way. Despite being in a gang of cold blooded killers, he has the most kindest heart. Don't let his kindness be pushed around, because he can turn on you in a second. War, fighting and running is not something he wants. Befriending people is also super easy for him, he's always open to get to know people who can help him out in the long run. He's sneaky.

 Best Friend: Yongguk

Role In Gang: Second In Command Assassinator 

Name: Youngjae

Age: 18

Personality: He hardly is ever serious. He is one of the people that can probably fool you the most, but can also be the less of your worries. He is always the mood brightner, and loves getting people in trouble. Even though he's one of the more older members, he's definetely far from it. He loves shooting random things and people, playing gun wars just for fun. Life's just a huge game to him, and he loves picking on everyone. Even though he is childish, his mood can change very quick.

Role In Gang: Deciver/ Kidnapper

Brother: Himchan

Name: Himchan

Age: 18 

Personality: He's definitely very bubbly and outspoken. He isn't reserved and bloody thirsty like the rest of them. He loves having fun and making friends, Pretty much doing the things he isn't supposed to do. Even though he looks pretty threatening and cold hearted, he's far from it. He would never, ever hurt anybody unless they deserved it or was a major threat to him or his gang. Himchan is the most biggest kid ever, and always will drop any mission for food. Yeah, food. He's a kid.

Role In Gang: Deciver/ Kidnapper

Brother: Youngjae

 

                  


 

 

Name: Mika

Age: 16 

Personality: She's a very hardcore girl. She uses her sweet and charming looks to get what she wants, when she wants. She's also one of the best fighters and killers in the industry. Even though she can be sweet and charming, she also has a very sharp tongue. Her words can be more deadly then the gun on her hip. She isn't the most brightest though, and is a major cluts. She also is a major tomboy, and doesn't mind a few days of hanging out with the boys. But, she's cute & deadly

 

 

 

 

 

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Zebra12 #1
Can't wait for chapter 1!!