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RESOURCE NO. FIFTEEN
< using gestures >

we’ve all read that prompt where someone is smirking, cocking an eyebrow and tossing their hair every other word. it’s annoying and it’s overused, not because they’re moving too much, but because nobody actually does that. rather than making your character repeat the same three actions on loop, spice things up! here are some helpful starting points

anger: 

  • curling and uncurling fists
  • sharp exhales
  • rolling eyes
  • cracking neck 
  • setting jaw
  • grinding teeth 
  • pursing lips

boredom/impatience: 

  • scratching neck/back
  • tapping or drumming fingers on something
  • tapping foot
  • changing position repeatedly, as if to get comfortable
  • leaning back 
  • kicking feet or putting them up
  • looking around 

nerves: 

  • looking around but, like, different
  • hands in pockets
  • fidgeting with an object
  • biting lip, inside of cheek, or nails 
  • tapping or drumming fingers on something

if this is helpful, i can expand the list, but i don’t see people struggling with physical displays of positive emotions as much as i do negative ones.

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Scarlet_Sky
#1
Thank you for sharing this!
It helped me and gave me some ideas for future stories. <3
royalblueblood
#2
This is really one of the most helpful thread.
Thank you so much for sharing useful writing tips!
I will make sure to check out all of the chapters soon :>
Xophias
#3
Chapter 43: Chapter 30: I'm so glad I found this, it's really going to help me in the future! It's very well done :D Thank you so much!
MistressOfAngst
#4
Omg thank you so much for making this! Sadly I can’t check it out fully yet due to my schedule but I know it’ll be very useful!
stellarstarlight
#5
Chapter 4: This is awesome, thanks so much!
katastrophy
#6
hi, I just want to ask does it matter if we write the whole thing in past tense or present tense? do you have a link where we can learn about these past and present thingy like I know its basic but I hate it how I can't just seem to rack my brain to do the right grammar thing. I think that's the only thing that's holding me back from publishing my stories or not even continuing to write the next chapter and ended up abandoning the story :( it's a struggle.
oeschinen
#7
Chapter 2: Thank you for taking the time to compile and write all of this ^^ I appreciate the effort and it's very useful.
kamski
#8
Chapter 29: Just wanted to say thank you for taking the time to put these together! They're really helpful!