Beyond the Lines

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It's been a few months since I lost my computer and inspiration, but I'm back!

I am not sure how I will be going with this story, since it is an idea I had a long time ago and just found myself willing to write about again recently.

It's Jaechun, because our little 5starssupporter needed some and they fit.

Title is inspired by an artist I met recently who likes to mix words in a unusual way and I liked that. XD

summary : Jaejoong is lost in his guilty nostalgia but he didn't expect the world - and espacially Yoochun - to change that much to prove him wrong.

 

 

 

 

PS to my other-fic readers (in particular Jaemintee) : I don't forget the stories. I will go back on it too~

Foreword

How he loved to watch those candid faces, scrutinize them, envy them. He loved seeing those four smiling boys facing him, happy and carefree.

Yeah four, since the fifth one, he couldn’t envy him.

[...]

The intimate way he and Yoochun appreciate the soft melody of each song brought them closer every day more, so similar yet so different from what he shared with the others. Even if he hoped – knew- they share was more than this after those years together, Music was clearly the cement of their bond, the red string linking them forever.

[...]

Was it because of him that lately Yoochun was only working as an actor?

Melodia-no-hanashi
Once I get my life back, I'll work on that one. For Christmas! Promise!!!!!!!

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5starnables
#1
Chapter 2: I'm doneeeeeeeee~!
Like I told you before, me like it. ^^
You described well on how Yoochun reacted when someone is approaching him and acting like know him while he didn't at all. I can imagine it well how Jaejoong must be desperate to call on Yoochun, to make Yoochun finally admitting the fact that they know each other. It must torn Jaejoong apart when he didn't understand a thing and yet Yoochun was being so distant. They were soulmate after all! And Jaejoong's words was so- so... how to explain it? Well, it hit right on the point, this part is : "You can't forget more than ten years in one day." Poor Jaejoong... >"<
And Yoochun, though he was acting overly polite and distant, can't blame him. :( After all, Jaejoong was a stranger on his eyes so--- Tho I had to say that at least, at the very least, Yoochun did seem to be bothered with Jaejoong feeling depressed. He said it! He thought that he couldn't leave Jaejoong alone. But he did. Perhaps because he's a public figure so he couldn't act recklessly?

Buttttttttttt I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Hope you can finish it soon. Kkkkkkkk.
Thanks, unn! <3
affgaga #2
Chapter 2: owhmy.. this is scary..
angiestel #3
esperando por mas ojala se aclare pronto pobre jae
MoroccanBlackDragon
#4
Chapter 1: This is painful.
You have no idea
5starnables
#5
Chapter 1: TT_____TT poor jaejoong, how he's so insecure with everything going on with them. >"<
Yeah, Yoochun should have been there and should work for their music together! Or at least, maybe he should explain more to Jaejoong about his path or something... >"< Though Jaejoong shouldn't be that insecure- psh, he has that talent and ability to create the music. He's merely "just" a pretty face, but it is kinda understandable.
It feels real, it feels true that Jaejoong might think like that- think that it's all because of him everything happened (though still, it's stupid to think that way! hmph). And especially, how he thinks about Yoochun. He must have a lot of thoughts about that stupid soulmate of his, if Yoochun hadn't said a thing about that with Jaejoong. That something is wrong and it's probably related to him when Yoochun didn't create the music. After all, from DBSK days, it is widely known that Yoochun has a thousand of passion in music. Music felt like his life there, and even Yoochun himself said that no matter what he wanted to keep making the music that time... so it must be hard for Jaejoong to see and wonder in silence what is wrong with Yoochun, right? >"<

Sorry I rambled aimlessly~ lol. XD Thank you for the first chapter, unn! I will be waiting for the second oneeeeeee.
And you know, me like it! You put it so right and make it feels so real, I wonder what will happen next! I wonder how jaechun will interact when they finally meet! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!
5starnables
#6
Yeay you posted it!!!!! *throws confetti*
Thank you, thank you so much unnnnnnnnn~ my best lovely unnie... kkkkkk. I'll read it soon! Tomorrow! Promise~~~~ and then you have to make the continuation since yoochun is still locked up here. #oops kkkkkkkkk. *runs*