The Lobotomist

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Police Chief Park Leeteuk of the Forensic Investigation Division has seen a lot of odd cases in his time, but none quite like this. When the bodies of young women begin turning up, all murdered in the same fasion, he suspects he's got a serial killer on his hands. 

There are two types of serial killers: the ones who plan their crimes, and the ones who don't. The ones who don't are often impulsive and leave all sorts of clues scattered about the crime scene, clues that make it easy for the police to track the killer. 

Needless to say, it's the ones who plan their crimes that are the more dangerous. 

Foreword

I first came up with this idea when I was learning about lobotomies in a psych class. For those of you who don't know what a lobotomy is, it's a procedure that cuts up the prefrontal cortex in an attempt to cure mental illness. As you can probably guess, it doesn't work very well. 

This is my first attempt at writing a crime/mystery fic. I welcome all of you to attempt to guess who the killer is. Please enjoy. 

Warning: this is not for the squeamish. 

Disclaimer: I do not hate any of the idols I use in this story, especially not the ones I make victims of the serial killer. 

Thanks to all the amazing graphic artists at iD0RKIE's shop who made posters for this fic. I decided to use cyberchasefan200's, because I loved the mood of the poster. Thank you very much! Here's a link to the picture: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/175406/10/o------e---------e---request-shop-graphics-request-review-shop-superjuniorm-graphicreview-storyreview

Anyone who needs a poster should REQUEST AT THIS SHOP. They'll have it done in less than a day. Usually. They're kind of awesome. 

DO NOT READ THE COMMENTS IF YOU DO NOT WANT SPOILERS!!!!

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AshleyEvans306715 #1
Chapter 20: Hello~ This is my second time reading this story. I first read it when I didn't have an account on AFF but now that I do, and having stumbled across it again, I absolutely HAD to leave a comment! This story was so good, it had me on the edge of my seat from start to finish. And I honest to god, did NOT see that ending coming. For all those people in the comments who actually managed to guess who the Lobotomist was, I applaud your skills. But the story was really amazing; the plot twists were unexpected and I just loved the character development. This is definitely by far one of my favorite stories on AFF and I really think it deserves more recognition!
Wufaaan #2
Chapter 20: I believe this the best Super Junior fic that I've read, I wished I found this earlier during my ELF days in high school. Thank for making this story, authornim. It was worth the read and I had fun guessing on who is the Lobotomist. Kudos to you! <3
Wufaaan #3
Chapter 17: MY GUESS WAS RIGHT! OMG! Looking forward to the ending, authornim.
Wufaaan #4
Chapter 5: This is my first crime thriller SJ fic, I'm so happy because it's related to my major. The chapters just keeps on getting better and I'm looking forward to know who's the Lobotomist. :)
citrusmilk #5
this was a really engaging read!! it really did keep me on edge as things got more intense. the lack of focus on a romantic subplot was refreshing as well!
mountaindew_ #6
Chapter 20: Yayy my main guess is right! XD although I'm a bit swayed in chapter 16 haha, you're so good at playing with your words and that make me confused as who is the murderer likely. And I don't even know that the song can give off creepy vibes (because until now I THOUGHT it's a sweet song you know...). This is my first time reading a non EXO fic but I don't regret it. Off to the sequel!
SarangRae #7
Chapter 20: Well now I can never listen to Replay ever again. That's cool.
I think I'm gonna wait till daytime to move onto the sequel cos oh my god it's 3am and I don't need more inspiration for a nightmare tonight.
shyamala #8
Chapter 5: Well scratch it. Coz the killer was following morita when donghae was with her. So it couldn't be him
shyamala #9
Chapter 3: Hmm.... So I think I am gonna chase the murderer through the story lmao. So the guy/girl gets the introvert(?) or kinda social awkward people and in an attempt to help their mental state(?) he performs tje procedure? Idk it could be a very rough guess but it could be Donghae :D
huehuehue #10
Chapter 15: i knew sungmin couldnt be the lobtomist. it was too easy, knowing the murderer.
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