Chapter 3: OH MY GOD I'M LITERALLY SMILING WHILE READING THIS ESPECIALLY THE KISSING PART ! SCREAMS >< THEY KIsSED I DIED. I SERIOUSLY I LOVE HOW CUTE THIS STORY IS <3 YOU'RE DOING A GREAT JOB THANK YOU SO MUCH , I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS ^^
and the vernon's apartment!! aka my favourite part!! everything is so sweet and cute and fluffy here. i feel so soft from reading how hansol and jeonghan loves each other. from the way hansol kissed jeonghan's forehead (i am still recovering. it's such a cute and sweet thought i don't want to imagine how it would go but the image won't disappear from my mind and my heart is bursting from a lot of feeling) to how hansol cooked jeonghan's favourite food... jeonghan opening all the windows for hansol even though he knows it would take him a lot of energy. their cute interaction gives me life. the way hansol, at the very first, were confused and in denial with jeonghan being a ghost, to hansol finally realising that even after jeonghan died and became a ghost, he is still jeonghan, whom he loves and cherishes. i think feeling how normal it is to be with jeonghan, ghost or not, is what really makes hansol truly believes. and that's why the ending is really sweet. the way they really talk about their feelings to each other. the way they are know well-aware of each other's love. everything that's been there since the first chapter finally reaches a when they kissed and they are happy, because ghost or not, they are still together and they are still in love. i think i have said this before. but REALLY. i am just so in love with this chapter i don't think i am making any sense.
[Because they were truly happy, and in that moment they almost felt like they had beaten death.]
siGHS talk about favourite line. you don't know how much i love this line. i think it sums their relationship and love really well.
because i can only upvote once, here is an extra upvote!! extra kudos!! extra love!! i really lke this chap and this fic so i am def looking forward to the next chapter!! fighting, lydja~~ and yeah i end up writing a too-long comment so i need to cut it ;;
Chapter 3: YES!! CHAPTER THREE!! i am 100% in love with this fic, especially this chapter!!
the story begins with a heartwarming moment of hansol, grateful that he could see jeonghan one more time, but unsure if jeonghan is just a part of his mind or if he is real. he must've been really confused ;; what i find really amazing is how the whole atmosphere of this fic is not dark at all. idk, the first fic has this heavy feeling, probably because of jeonghan's death, but the second and third chapter has a lighter tone than the first one, and i think that's really cool! even though the theme is pretty dark, i really like how happy this story is heading too!! also that small moment of cheolsoo gives me life. lol. also, jeonghan giving spoilers to hansol as a way to prove himself... somehow i could see jeonghan doing that lmao. he is such a trickster lmao.
also!! jeonghan kissing vernon's cheeks!! i am officially dead. such a cute moment, my poor heart can't take it. T.T
Chapter 1: OKAY FIRST AND FOREMOST ~ Thank you for writing a 2han fic! ! OMFG ! I wanted to squeal so much while reading this ;; they're so adorable omg my heart can't take this im gona die :< And omg i'm curious of what's gona happen ? ? I knw i'm probably gona reading the next chapter lol haha
Chapter 1: I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY LIKE IT. LIKE. AT FIRST YOU CAN SEE HOW CUTE THE TWO OF THEM ARE!!
THIS PHRASE "How can I be the prettiest when someone like you exist?" KILLED ME. IN A GOOD WAY. I FEEL YOU VERNY I FEEL YOU!!
and joshy josh!!! verny!!! so cute!! i find hansol and jeonghan spending their time together really cute!! and i know ive said this before but oblivious!jeonghan!!! aww he doesnt know verny has a thing for him :') but jealous!verny is really cute too.
and i have said this before too but the symbolism!! the whole watch not breaking the first time but finally break the second time :(( tho i do wonder why yjh picked a watch of all things??
and d u d e the letter. he hasnt even confessed yet.
but it is ok!! he is coming back!!! and i m waiting for it!! xx
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