Love how their relationship develops from friends to lovers, and that the oc is flawed like all of us ;-; I dislike the ending omg but it’s beautiful how you symbolize evergreen and trees and relate those images to something divine like love (but I still want baek to be alive asdfghjk)

Chapter 1: Aw, what a lovely story! I thought Baekhyun would end up getting buried under the tree so he could sustain the evergreen forever -- reminded me of Buddhist forest burial traditions, almost! I'm always a er for stories like this, and the symbolism of the tree hits me right in the heart <3 !

Chapter 1: OH GOD THE CARDIAC ARREST HIT ME FROM NOWHERE!
I really like the symbolism you used, the tree to their friendship.
Also i would be be REALLY REALLY sad for the ending but the way you mentioned how 'he's gone physically but they would live on together with this new beginning' really got to me. It shows how meaningful their love was, from bestfriends and separation and all that, they still found each other again.
ALSO I REALLY LIKE YOUR WRITING.
Keep it up!!

Chapter 1: OHMYGODD!!!! I really like the symbolisms, how when they planted the tree it's the first time they meet, and how when they go through fights the plant has to withstand storms :") It just somehow made their love more meaningful;; even though the ending is... well DX But baek has been so stupid hasn't he? Does its just hurt his pride so much that he simply can't apologise for letting such words slip out of his mouth? He's wasted two years of time that he could have spent with jihae :< and to only come to her after two years-- wow, i'm just;; wow. But i really like how you described everything. I laughed at 'like a burnt piece of bacon' and how she thought saying 'i do' is like getting married tho LMAO XD

I love the comparisons with their tree! This was very beautifully written. It's perfect.

Chapter 1: This fanfic is wonderfully spectacular! I absolutely love it (even though there's a sad death character). I mainly love how you compare their growing friendship-relationship to a tree. That's a really nice metaphor/simile. Their characters were both so strong and loyal; Baekhyun might have been a jerk, but I'm glad he came to a conclusion as to how he really felt for the OC. This is a beautiful story, Author-nim! Keep up the amazing work. ^^

Chapter 1: My overall assessment: Nice descriptive ability. Good use of figurative speech. Successful in assimilating the evergreen as a point of resemblance to their lives. You definitely disrupted what I was doing with your fic. I was supposed to be editing my own, but once I started reading this, I basically disregarded everything and consumed Evergreen like I was hungry for reading. Although it was fast-paced, it actually fit the growth of the Evergreen really well. You made sure that the scenes in each part would fit each phase of the Evergreen's life. Kudos to you, author-nim! This really broke my heart, too. *shakes head* I'm really not sure what to feel. *sobs FIX MY BROKEN HEART, AUTHOR-NIM!* Maybe I should stick with awe for what you've written.

Chapter 1: Part 1: Aww, that's the cutest thing ever. I can imagine little Baekhyun, Sehun, Luhan, and little JIhae. You make them look so cuddly. And we have a short HunHan moment here. :'( I hope we'll have just a little bit more of this in the parts to come although this is a Baekhyun fic.
Part 2: How can Baekhyun be so smooth? I think the way you make him to be fits him in real life. If it was me, my face would probably blush like a red tomato more than Jihae. And I like how you started it with friendship. In a way, they're too young for the falling madly in love phase.
Part 3: Hey, why the hell did Baekhyun have to be such a jerk? He definitely has mood swings. Either I'm reading on this too much or will this have some sort of function in the following parts? Or maybe he got jealous? Did he misinterpret what he heard? No. This is too fast for me. They need more moments as friends.
Part 4: GAHD! If he likes her why would he think that way about her? Ugh. Baekhyun is so frustrating! AND NOOOOOO! As much as I ship Taeyeon and Baekhyun, you have GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!!!!!! You know what happens when you open yourself to a girl who likes you! Baekhyun, stop this madness!
Part 5: You're such a jerk, Byun Baekhyun! Why would you use Taeyeon like that if you're so in love with Jihae. You're playing with the hearts of two girls. That's not fair. Just because you're a boy doesn't mean you have the right to do this. And just because you had a misunderstanding with Jihae. You should have made more effort instead of being with Taeyeon. I hate you!!!
Wait. wait. wait. But what the heck happened to Baek? What is this?
Part 6 onwards: Ohmygod. Ohmygod. *flips table and then wails* No, really. I'm crying so hard right now while typing this. I'm not going to spoil it for anyone but just that this is really, really saddening. What you just did to me is INJUSTICE! Just kidding. But really. This is injustice.

Chapter 1: Wow man. Seriously. Wow. All those connections and figurative language flowed so well together! I liked the idea of the evergreen tree thing and ... somehow I pity taeyeon more than jinhae or baekhyun. Yes jinhae suffered the death of a loved one, which is in fact a traumatic event, and baekhyun suffered from a sadistic ending caused by heart failure, but taeyeon has been in love for years and having her heart crushed since she was led on and only used, was a really REALLY depressing situation. She chose the right choice though. Breaking up with baekhyun instead of waiting for the day hell look at her instead. I really like your writing! And especially how serene and calm it is.