Mistakes

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But despite all the tears, the pain and Jinyoung being right, Youngjae was selfless and Jaebum was the best mistake that he’d do over again and again.

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Ahgasophie #1
Chapter 1: This was lovely. It’s hard to write a short piece and you made it look effortless. Thank you.
shinee_ta05 #2
Chapter 1: It's sad yet so beautiful.
miss-tery #3
Chapter 1: I love the theme mistake that you embedded throughout the story. The different representations of mistake like Youngjae talking about the mistakes he made, Jaebum as the mistake and the notion that their entire relationship was a mistake. It really tied the story together. The build up in your story was amazing- there was an underlying tension that kept building with the copious amounts of foreshadowing you'd written. Again, you used the idea of mistakes to really embed that sense of dread in me. Finally, the ending of the story killed me. Youngjae's entire character is summarised in that last line- his desperation, selflessness, his devotion to Jaebum is so beautifully written. Thank you to for a great read. I don't dabble much in the Got7 fandom so this was a great piece to enjoy!
Soah28 #4
Chapter 1: So sad. :(
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