Captured Prey

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Description

After being a fan for so long, she finally gets to meet him.........

Foreword

This is a little something I started last year and I recently decided to go through and have people beta it for me and I made some changes so i could publish it

note: i think the genre is called original female character. someone correct me if I'm wrong

UPDATE: for now i will not rate this as mature but as it is a work-in-progress that could change and i will rate accordingly.

UPDATE: chapter two is currently being written, i hope to finish this week as long as i dont get writer's block :P

UPDATE: Chapter two is up!!! I was feeling inspired so I banged away and got it written today!!

CHAPTER THREE IS UP!! trying something new. in the story where clothing is described, i have created an outfit using polyvore and hyperlinked it to the description, going to check if it is accessible and if not i will find a way. Thanks for reading!! *yay they work!!! i think i will continue to do this in other chapters*

Chapter 4 is up. this one is a bit longer than the others and i dont know if i like it 100% yet. maybe i'll edit it and repost at another time. Again, as with chater three, there is a hyperlink within the story. it would lovely if you could take the time to stop and listen to it.

Hey readers!!! Sorry about the delay in updating. I experienced a bout of writers block and this week college started. I really really really want to write again but i'm not sure when i will find the time. I promise to be thinking what happens next in this story. Chapter 5 is up. It is shorter than the others but I felt like i needed to get it published.

CHAPTER 7 IS UP!! SORRY FOR MAKING EVERYONE WAIT SO LONG. I sincerely hope you feel it was worth the wait :)

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Working on chapter 4. I decided to deal with some self image issues in combination withthe story. So it's giving me problems, of course lol

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murasaki_xia
#1
Chapter 18: This chapter would help a lot for my story.. Thanks.. Since the camp recently, he rose up close to behind second bias. And I got curious about the story. Actually I don't feel any ual attraction from Hyesung, so it was weird for me reading the M-rated. XD
loveandstuff #2
Chapter 32: :') this was a great way to end it! Thank you for writing this beautiful story
I want the wedding please!
yshinnoona
#3
Chapter 32: love that epilogue. ties everything up so nicely
loveandstuff #4
Chapter 28: Omg Kaye! I just started your friend's story and I knew I recognized the name! Author, you sly fox :)
loveandstuff #5
Chapter 29: I think I know exactly where this story is heading and I can't wait! Also, cute title °u°
loveandstuff #6
Chapter 26: Wow, thank you so much for taking the time to add the outfits, they really made the chapter so much more vivid! The tops just matched everyone so well, I loved it! <3
"Shinhwa takes care of their own" that's so beautiful! :')
loveandstuff #7
Chapter 25: I'm so excited! Is it going to be couple outfits?
Also I really like having the hyperlinks right in with the story so that I'm not having to continuously scroll up and down.
You were right author, it is most definitely looking up! c: I look forward to the next update!
loveandstuff #8
Chapter 21: Nooooooooo! How could you! But at the same time, thank you for updating!! :D

Ugh, school made me get behind on this amazing story T_T
c02chu #9
Chapter 24: You just have to leave it at that folder.....Cliff hanger!
loveandstuff #10
Chapter 18: This chapter is so sweet! All of Shinhwa trying so hard just warms my heart :')
Also I hate how difficult fans make it for idols to date openly
Keep up the work author, your story is very beautiful!