Chapter 1: I read space hair before getting ready for work but now I legit can't stop crying and I love your beautiful writing you amazing writer you I cant believe you puzzle all these words together from your phone???? You're very talented with pacing (again) and have such an eloquent vocabulary and your exposition is emotional and meaningful and not at all dry and now I am a tiny jonghyun, crying in my bed. bless you hahahaha

Chapter 4: This is so late I am actually ashamed of myself x.x
But OMG OMG that someone is me! It is, right, right? It so is :D
And even tho I still firmly stick to my claim that you are ultimately incapable of writing fluff, this is certainly as close as you'll get (except Jongyu parebting, that stuff slays x.x) and I'm actually real proud of you for doing so well in this ㅠㅠ here, have a heart <3 and another, for the effort <3 Onho is just, I can't Emma, my heart. And I feel so bad for Jinki bc he's degrading himself throughout the entire chapter for reasons that are out of his reach to amend but he's still doing it ㅠㅠ EMMA STAY AWAY FROM MY MAN WITH YOUR DEPRESSIVE THOUGHT HE DOESN'T DESERVE IT *comforts Jinki* and Minho is Minho, Mr. Tall, dark and handsome, get outta here x.x and they find each other after so many years, like, THEY WERE DESTINED TO BE TOGETHER FROM THE VERY START ㅠㅠ and your writing never ceases to amaze me, like, stfu Emma, you're immensely talented and I would kill you if that meant I'd get your gift, I would ㅠㅠ ilysm omfg look at what you've done to me ㅠㅠ

Chapter 3: I have tears in my eyes. It's beautiful. It's really really beautiful. Stop saying you cannot write or that you're not good at what you do because this is amazing. It's just ... , I'm speechless. you, you're an amazing writer and I won't accept otherwise from you.

Chapter 3: Yeah, well, you are quite incapable of writing fluff, we've established as much already XD
So, yeah, uhm, sorry, Idk what to say, really, I'm kinda trying to get out of this minded phase you've just put me in, so that's why I'm not really hyping up the comment o.o it'll come in a minute dw.
Why are you so deep? Seriously, doesn't matter what you write, it's always so freaking deep and this quite obviously slayed me in the best possible way. Yeah. Still minded. Like, how do you even come up with this, and the definition of insanity and the theory and everything. And I loved Jjong's character. I really can't explain it. Because he did what he did for a /reason/, even if it only made sense to him, there was a reason, so ofc he wouldn't classify himself as being insane, but he still knew that no one would really understand, not even himself. Like, he had clarity, even through his insanity. (Also, not to say you're insane (well, you are) but is it on purpose you instilled some of your own character traits in Jjong? Like being vegetarian and liking spiders and then the thing about the good writers, 'cause that explains why you're so odd).
And Minho. His development, God it's so real. Especially how he realises everything than Jjong has known for so long at the end, his struggle throughout the entire story. Like, again, might as well shoot me down (RETHORICALLY, MORON, RETHORICALLY) bc this is so, indescribable, really. In a good way ^-^
And this time I noticed things from our convos ALRIGHT I NOTICED THEM. makes it feel so personal, you know? Crying ㅠㅠ
Again, if you think this is rough, then it's definitely a diamond in the rough, and you don't need to do anything about it bc it's perfect in so many ways and it's own league entirely, don't change anything, alright ㅠㅠ I, yeah, wow, this comment is so lackluster in capslock and being hyper compared to my usual comments, but, y'know, kinda your fault with this gorgeous masterpiece.

I love these shots, aaaaah so good ^^

Chapter 2: Here goes the ramble
Firstly, again, omg off, there you go getting me in the mood for some hot (bc Jongtae is hot, okay) but nonono why not make it kinda angsty instead? Like wth, that is not fair >:c That being said, even in my barely awake state at past 2 AM, I felt the emotion, okay, felt it so hard. From the way Tae practically eyes him to the -thingy-whatever to their argument, bc everything was so well detailed I could virtually feel it happening ㅠㅠ I'm not even that much of a Jongtae shipper at all, but the feels are real man, alrigt, so so real, I can't ㅠㅠ. It's beautifully written and it just you in to never let go.

Also, I'm kinda sitting here waiting for you to make an Internet War fic bc that thing literally screams from miles away, so, you know, after Jongho and Jongtaekey there's also that >.> I know you want to, okay, I can see it. This innocent thing is just a cover up for your real Jongtae fics >.>

On a last rampant note (I really need to get this out okay, even if I did in skype) the "Jjong take me". Omg I wanted to laugh and scoff and cry and scream bc that comment. /That/ comment. I can't Emma, you did this on purpose XoX

I love you so much, okay, even though my heart can't handle your stories, and I hate you, but I love you ㅠㅠ (see, I can be lovable and kind too)

Chapter 1: And there goes my heart. Poof, gone. How can you do this to me? In what wicked corner of your mind could you ever think it possibly acceptable to take my heart in those deceiving hands of yours only to clench it and crush it, slowly, painfully. I put my trust in you and you shatter it, blow it to smithereens all over the place along with all my hopes and dreams. Do you enjoy seeing me bleed like this? Is it pleasurable for you to obliterate my world? You monster ㅠㅠ
Omg, this is so beautiful and heart-breaking and just at the description I was like ", this better not be ing angst o.o". I drew that with pure love and fluff in my mind, I'll never be able to look at that drawing again ㅠㅠ. You exceeded my expectation in the best and worst ways possible and I think you broke my mind for the next week. Seriously, I have so many mixed feelings about this and I hate you for doing this to me, but God, I can't even begin to express the extent of my love for you because this is for /me/ and it's absolutely and undoutedly one of the most amazing things I've ever read and thank you, thank you so ing much <3 And don't you dare change anything in this, it's so perfect and wonderful AND I CAN'T YOU CAN'T WHAT IS THIS WORLD EVEN.
I'd like to ask you to un-friend-lock it because this is beautiful and the world (read: the population of our little awkward society of AFF) /needs/ this, needs to read this ㅠㅠ
(Also, could that "There's no God out there. If there is, he's just a sadist." possibly have anything to do with our convo? It seems all too convenient to not be >.>)