Can I?

Description

Kyungsoo was ridiculed and wanted someone to defend him when he failed to do so himself. 
Jongin was a coward, who grew tired of always turning a blind eye.  
 

Foreword

short one-shot inspired by a song.
I hope everyone who gives it a read will like it.  
Show lots of love! Upvote and comment. 
I would be very thankful! ^.^
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Thank you for your time  :)
(a/n at the top of the chapter, please read!)
 
 
 
 
 
-ℐɴαrιCнι

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green009
#1
Chapter 1: awww this was too cute><
jokersdaughter2 #2
Loved this
moonandbaek #3
Chapter 2: I want to join the kaisoo chat but how do I contact you? Do I just msg you on tumblr? Last time I did non of the admins listed replied to me..
floralnori
#4
I can't believe I didn't comment on all this cute before. I'm glad you tacked on the update so I had a reason to re-read and now say how much I like this story. But first, why in the world do I enjoy bullied Kyungsoo so much? From Venus to Miscalculation and The Boy with the Blues, it's like they're pumpkin/white chocolate cheesecake. Nom nom. So everything was awesome here, from Jongin watching from a distance, to Baekhyun transforming Kyungsoo before the dance, to the moment when Jongin finally made his move with the eyes of the school upon them. I especially loved Junmyeon and Baekhyun cheering in the background while Jongin and Kyungsoo danced. It's all the best parts of a summer teen movie. :)
uwujongin
#5
Chapter 1: Ahh it really is cheesy, I survived though it was cute XD kyungsoo is too nice tho, I wouldnt have been so forgiving lol
Kara137 #6
Chapter 1: That was so cheessyyy but I loooove it~ I was smiling all along. And the song... I laughed when I saw HSM. But it was great and really good with the story too.
I don't know if I've ever told you but I really like how you write and describe the scenes and characters. It's so realistic. I'm a fan~ ♡
Jonginmybias
#7
Chapter 1: OMG!! It's been a while. I'm not sure if you remember me, I wrote a few long comments in Susceptible to You. I'm amazed. No words are enough to describe how much I loved this. I've said this to you a ton of times already but I love your writing style. You describe their feelings so well. And in the end, the way Jongin's actions matched the song! You're amazing, really. And the way they were in love with each other and neither of them knew. I don't know why didn't I read this before. THANK YOU for writing these amazing stories. I won't ever find someone who writes as beautifully as you.
nightescapade
#8
Chapter 1: I BINGE READ YOUR FICS OKEH BUT I AM NOT YET DONE HAHAHA

THIS IS SO CUTE!!!!! THO I FELT SO SAD FOR KYUNGSOO BEING BULLIED LIKE THAT. MY POOR BUBU, MY POOR SON, I WANNA HUG HIM. I UNDERSTOOD JONGIN'S SITUATION AND I KNOW THE PEER PRESSURE HE HAS FOR BEING FRIENDS WITH THE BULLIES SO DEFENDING KSOO IS REALLY NOT EASY AT ALL. EASILY SAID THAN DONE LIKE WHAT OTHERS SAY. BUT I'M SO HAPPY AND I'M COOING WHEN JONGIN FINALLY FOUND THE COURAGE TO APPROACH KYUNGSOO AHHHH THIS IS SUCH A NICE FIC :)))

THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!
Lariat95
#9
Chapter 1: Aww that was so beautiful, my feeeels
rukia124 #10
Chapter 1: This is beautiful! The way you transitioned everything is great and the emotions hit me in the feels! It's soooo adorable and fluffyyy with a hint of angst. Everything is great in this work! Awesome job~ <3

-Bunny