Storytime with Kym

Description

The following chapters are short stories varying in lengths and genres. Unless stated, each story is different and does not continue from the previous story. These stories consist mostly of original characters, so if you aren’t into those then these stories aren’t for you. But anyways, I hope you enjoy.

Foreword

What if I say I love to make horror stories? Yes, most of the stories here will be horror.

I made this to help me to improve my story telling skill so I can apply that into my game development. So please be as critical as possible so that I can improve. I am an adult, I can take a few swings on my stories.

Also! For all of you guys who think the stories lack backstories, that's because it is purposely put out. Some of these stories are more like scenes than an actual whole story. This story layout is what I would like to use in my game. Thank you for reading!

REVIEWS

Tastes Like Metal reviewed by: Reading is Beautiful (83%)

First two stories are reviewed by WHIMSICAL review shop

REVIEW LINK 1 Tastes Like Metal (51%)

REVIEW LINK 2 Sweet Liquor Lips (55%)

Story made:

Poster made:

Back to Top ↑

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
yutoppang #1
Chapter 1: Okay, even though you warned me about horror in the foreword, I did not expect this first short story to be so intense!!
I love the fact that the characters don't have a name, since they aren't so much relevant anyway, but also because it sort of gives more mysterious aura especially to the woman who killed the other.
The one issue I have is that the grammatical tense throughout the story is quite inconsistent––at one point, you're using the past tense, but then it suddenly jumps to the future tense, then back to the past. Just for better flow, it's better to have a consistent tense.
Otherwise, interesting plot and pretty good character development!
Back to Top ↑