Crashing down(rewrite)

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A/N Yeah,the perfromance 1 is tonight and I can't relax my nerves.....I feel so nervous.....Also,I wrote a rewrite but I didn't delete the first just in case y'all still wanna read it.

Jimin was walking across a road when he heard the sounds of sirens blaring and the commotion of people seemed defeaning.He tapped a man's back,attempting to ask what was behind all the commotion.
"Ahjussi,what's with all the commotion?" The man shrugged."There was car that crashed onto a pillar but then they found a boy between the pillar and the car.Such a shame,the kid looked so young....and the collision looks so bad....If you ask me,I truly hope the kid lives but...I don't think he will tho.He was pretty crushed." He nodded,agreeing wholeheartedly.He'd have to warn s about road safety later on.....

He was met by a quiet dorm.......well....mostly quiet.Jin was in the kitchen,Hoseok and Taehyung watching anime and reacting loudly,Namjoon and Yoongi doing some stuff on a laptop.He furrowed his eyebrows when he saw who was missing......the kid still hadn't returned yet?how pathetic.....but deep inside,he couldn't help but worry and there's a gut wrenching feeling inside him that he felt for some reason.....

"Hey guys,I just heard a kid got crushed badly between a vehicle and a post(pillar?whatever,Idk how to translate).What a brutal way to die,honestly." He plopped down onto the couch."Reminds me of something,Joonie can you go check up on Jungkookie?He's

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Caramel_lover369
Just a short lil update....currently on a writer's block. Idunno why but I wanna write but when I get to it Im just--I don't rlly know...I dunno what to do...

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peggyw #1
Chapter 24: The truth!
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Chapter 16: Sweet story despite the sadness
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Chapter 10: Quite adorable
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Chapter 7: I think you write excellent fluff; guesstimate don't enjoy it as much
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Chapter 41: It's cringey how you call them oppa
they aren't your oppas. you're not even korean so stop it's just dumb
rinshuko
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Chapter 123: Well, this is something different from what I'm used to read from you, but it's quite interesting.
Shae94 #7
Boring
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Chapter 115: You're here to make me emotionally exhausted again. You're stories makes my little heart hurt, but I like it, somehow. I really love angst.
Glad that you're back
KristiCookie2002 #9
Chapter 1: XD I'm reading it for the first time since I bookmarked it but I'm confused. Are all of these one shots or is it an actual story?
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Chapter 112: WELCOME BACK!!!!!!!!!