Chapter 1: omg this is so funny. and cute. taeil is cute. jihoon is cute. evrything so cute ;;; n it should be five times jihoon said i love you only to realize taeil loves him too hahaha
AAAAHHHHHH!!! I'm dead, just dead. Every single story you have ever written just destroys me with all the damn feels and this one.. this one is the only amazing 5+1 story I have read and I've read a lot. Thank you for killing me everything you write something new. I will be patiently be waiting for a new story.
Chapter 1: UGHHHHHHHHHH.
Yeah okay. Sure. Whatever.
I didn't really PLAN for my day to start with a dopey grin across my face, but why not?
This was ridiculously cute, ESPECIALLY for a 5 + 1, which usually come across as cheap and tacky. This certainly didn't.
You know I always have something to say about your characterisations, and here I am again, throwing praise at your feet about it. I love how easily you can weave background characters into a story and highlight each one individually, without pulling too far away from the main focus. It's a short piece of work, but it feels as if there is so much that is involved in it. It's brilliant.
Great work again, Marve.
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