Boys & Detentions [Rewritten]

Description

               He smirks haughtily. "Fine," was his response before shoving the pink detention slip down his pants. He grins widely and his eyes are mischievous as he taps his crotch. "Come and get it."

Foreword

I don't know if I'm supposed to rate this M for strong language or not. It's not that bad, but it really depends on the person.

This is a rewrite.

The original just doesn't have any juice left.

 

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tbdssk17 #1
Chapter 3: When will you update thissss???
YSotter1103 #2
Chapter 3: omg! omg!..iam so hooked up..done reading d original one and came here and..woah this is BRILLIANT!..i cant get enough of it..kyaa..i hope it will be continued..(since i noticed its been awhile ds fic updated)..plss! hopefully it will not be abandon *crossfinger*..
btw new reader..
Bookangel12390 #3
Chapter 3: I can't deal with how good this is. I thought it couldn't get better but it just did. She is legit a queen, I don't even know half those words!
Random-reader #4
It's been to long, I log on everyday and hope this story is updated, please update soon!!!
pimp_daddy #5
Chapter 3: This version is better than the first one !im enjoying it so please do update soon!
knezovic14 #6
Chapter 3: Very good. Please update soon! :)
BestUsernameEver #7
Chapter 3: I'm really loving this! The plot is so amazing. I can't wait to read more. You're definitely a great writer!
Jeniiin #8
Chapter 3: i dont usually read oc stories, but yo this one is so good, please update soon <3 thanks:)
luvchocohey #9
Chapter 3: omg this version is better. U r sooo talented in writing! i can see and feel the hard work u put into this writing. It`s so good to see u trying so hard. U r a REAL writer. Keep writing good chapters! im going to make sure i read all of it XD
Random-reader #10
Chapter 3: Ahh, your writing is so good. I didn't read your original one and I wish I did so I could see how your have improved, keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more!! <3
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