When Two Worlds Collide

Description

A pair of twins with questionable pasts crosses paths with an unusual tourist in a country none of them come from or belong in. When an innocent encounter results in unexpected disaster, a one-time meeting soon transforms into a much more subtly complex relationship. But what future do homeless girls have with Asia’s top Hallyu stars?

 

[130330. Saturday] FINALLY reorganized the story. From now on, it'll be divided as follows:

 

 

Part 1: Introducing the Thieves (Chapter 1-7)

Word Count: about 25,000 

 

Part 2: Meeting the Singers (Chapter 8-15)

Word Count: about 27,000

 

Part 3: When Two Worlds Collide (Chapters 16 - TBD)

Word Count: N/A

 

There might be a Part 4 because I'm terrible at pacing myself, but we'll see....

Foreword

[Excerpt]

“Sir? Excuse me, sir, are you lost?” Yui asked in English. The young man looked up from his papers. The sight of another face ethnically similar to his own seemed to reassure him, though judging by his continued facial expression of extreme concentration, perhaps English wasn’t his preferred language, either.

Yui pointed to the pamphlets held in his hand, and trying to keep the sudden amusement out of her voice, she continued, “I’m sorry, sir, but you’re holding the map upside-down.” 

 

A/N: At my friend's suggestion, I started this project back in November 2011 for Nanowrimo (National Novel Writing Month). It was my first time taking part AND writing a fanfic, so I hope I don't disappoint.  I literally had only two days to plan a basic storyline before my one month of frantic plot-bunny vomiting ensued--not my style at all!

So this was what came out (albeit slightly less polished the first time around). Suju may not show up for the first few scenes (first member appears in Chapter 2), but I promise once they do appear, they will become an integral part of the plot. So with that said, I hope you will bear with me until the end. 

Thanks for dropping by, and I hope you'll enjoy this story of mine.

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lahdeedah000 #1
Chapter 18: Double update? Woahh!! Welcome back, I almost had a mini heart attack to see that you've updated, I thought I was seeing things for a second. ^^;

BUT GAHHHHHHH WHY THE ENDING I HATE CLIFFIES AHHHH >.<

Geeeez I had a list of things I wanted to comment about but all that's flown right out the window and all I can focus on now is WHAT HAPPENED WITH HAEEEE?

lol but loved Yui's reaction to Kyu, that dang maknae really is a mystery, so freaking snarky but dumb too but then when he opens his mouth and sings...can't even handle it. T_T

and kekeke Kouichi's jealousy ;)
swabluu
#2
Chapter 16: lkasdfj;lasjdfadflk;asflkasdkladsjfl;asdfj;sajfl;sdafsjadfl omg omg omg T___T cries how do you write so perfectly ;;
WhimsicallySolo #3
Chapter 16: EEK ZHOU MI AND HENRY and and and the fluffiness is just so endearing <3 and the part where Zhou Mi realises that Kouichi is a girl yay! Score for Zhou Mi! Haha and the Henry and Yui troll scene was so priceless~ I like Siwon's protectiveness of SJ it's so sweet and he's being logical and reasonable about it so props to him! The apartment thing was so cute and sad at the same time this is just like such a sweet chapter and I love the length aha it more than makes up for the delay! HWAITING!
lahdeedah000 #4
Chapter 16: Gahh Siwon! I love him here so much. I love how he's being so protective of the other boys, but being rational at the same time. It's kinda sad how there's that distance between them now, but hey, I'm guessing that means the plot is thickening, eh? ;) And YAY Henry and Zhoumi! I seriously can't wait to see what happens next. :)
boredbluejay #5
Chapter 16: I was gonna say. XD This chapter is so much longer than your usual updates. Ugh, it's all sorts of cute! Everything the boys do is adorable here. And I love that Siwon is such a gentleman, even though he doesn't trust them anymore.
I'm wondering the same thing as the twins: who asked for them to come along? O.o
WhimsicallySolo #6
Chapter 40: Ermahgahd. My feels.
I just read this chapter and it's like packed with so much tension and suspense (especially towards the last part). And i had been wondering for awhile now if any SJ members would have picked up the discrepancies in the twins' behaviour. With that being said, there has to be a point in time in which they'd have gotten so comfortable towards SJ that they'll eventually let their guard down, I was really anticipating it. And this was so nicely done!! Like i feel that the pacing of their friend-relationship is developing like not too quickly, but not too slowly. The developement of their friendship is believable which is like something that other ff neglect to ensure. And i love how your last line makes one wonder if like we can ever trust someone whom we know nothing about. I'm just really envious of how well you can write it's like T^T you feel me with emotions i can't even
Anyway, hwaiting author-nim!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter~
lahdeedah000 #7
Chapter 40: Aha! The tension (and probably drama) begins! It does seem like a sort of an awakening for the twins, they've let their guard down, both physically and emotionally, so much. They're friendship had been progressing so nicely, but now things are sure to get awkward and more distant. I like how Siwon was the one who noticed, and Sungmin also feeling a bit suspicious but being too much of a gentleman to say it directly. Your characterization is still perfect. ;) Can't wait to read more, as usual! ^^
swabluu
#8
Chapter 40: oh my god this is so jasdklfjalskdjfkasd gah I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY
boredbluejay #9
Chapter 40: Aww :( This chapter makes me sad, as I've said before. I'm not sure who I feel bad for, Siwon or the twins. Probably both, I guess. Also, going Siwon for being more intuitive than everyone else put together! XD
OrangeCandy
#10
Chapter 3: Ermagerd. I've just started reading this story and I love it~ T_T *dances around*
I read your other story 'Under the Blossoms of Autumn' ... i think that's what it's called. And I loved that story so much. :3 After I finished I was just like... I want to read a story just like this... T_T After about I month I realised I could have just went to the author and looked through their stories because different authors have different writing styles and I really like your writing style... like... A LOT!
I'm just going to read the rest of your story now... and yea... I love it~ *fangirling*