Red and White

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Jongin came into his life like a firework; bright, sparkly and loud, illuminating his darkened world in shades of red.

 

Foreword

A one-shot that I typed up attempting to get the feel for writing again. 
 
I hope everyone who gives it a read will like it.  
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(a/n at the bottom of the chapter)
 
 
 
-ℐɴαrιCнι
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kaisooooooo #1
Chapter 1: What the hell??? No warning??? That was so sudden??? And now I'm crying???
senbonhana #2
Chapter 1: I died a little at the ending! I really did not see that coming.. sob!
Great story. You built it up really well.
bts_taekookie #3
Chapter 1: Omo I was so pumped, so excited... then I involuntarily started crying. You are such an amazing author, and you truly know how to move people and make them actually feel for what you're writing... I loved it. Thank you ♡
nightescapade #4
Chapter 1: OKAY... I READ THIS AFTER PROVOCATIVE AND I SHOULD HAVE READ THIS FIRST INSTEAD BC IT HURT ME! YOU'RE ALWAYS HURTING ME BUT I STILL LOVE YOU HAHAHAHA. WELL YOU ALWAYS KNOW I LOVE YOU.

HOW TO START...HM... WELL, I LOVE HOMOPHOBIA FICS. IT'S REALISTIC. BUT I'D TELL YOU, YOU'RE REALLY GOOD AT PLAYING YOUR READERS' HEARTS BC ONE TIME I THOUGHT KYUNGSOO WILL FINALLY DECLARE HIS LOVE FOR JONGIN BUT HE LOOKED FOR A GIRLFRIEND OH GODDDDD THAT HURT ME BC IT HURT KYUNGSOO AND HE DIDN'T WANT IT TO HAPPEN IN THE FIRST PLACE BUT SINCE HE'S A SON OF A PASTOR, A RELIGIOUS FAMILY, HE JUST HAD TO BE STRAIGHT. AND JONGIN, I THOUGHT HE'D ACT ON HIS FEELINGS BUT HE DIDN'T. AND BAEKHYUN! I LOVE BAEKHYUN HERE! HE'S SUCH A SUPPORTIVE FRIEND. BUT TOO BAD AND AS I EXPECT, KSOO'S PARENTS DIDN'T LIKE IT THAT HE'S IN LOVE WITH JONGIN.

THE GERMANY PART HURT ME THE MOST BC KSOO SEEMS LIKE A PRISONER WHO DOESN'T HAVE THE RIGHT TO CONTACT PEOPLE AT ALL. THAT'S HARSH! BUT UNDERSTANDABLE SINCE HIS FAMILY ARE CONSERVATIVE ONES.

SO WHEN THEY MEET AGAIN, I THOUGHT IT'S GOING TO BE A HAPPY ENDING BC KSOO PROPOSED AND THEY GOT MARRIED BUT THE ENDING!!!!! I FEEL BETRAYED/1!!!!!!!!

BUT THATNK YOU FOR WRITING THIS BEAUTIFUL YET HEARTBREAKING STORY... I GET IT THAT IN LIFE SOMETIMES, SOMEONE NEW COMES AND SOMEONE LEAVES... IT JUST HAPPENED THAT KSOO IS THE UNLUCKY ONE. BUT AT LEAST, HE WAS LOVED BY JONGIN AND I KNOW EVEN IF JONGIN IS GONE...THEIR LOVE WILL CONTINUE...PERHAPS NEXT LIFE

LOVEYOUUUUUU <2333333333333333333333333333333333
siemprekaisoo #5
Chapter 1: Wow - that ending was a gut wrenching shock. Definitely not expecting that. The gravestone words killed me. Could this maybe have an update where Jongin`s death was really a horrible nightmare? You had developed your characters so wonderfully that it seems almost a shame to end it like this.
mylovelywookie #6
Chapter 1: Why this? It's not fair for them. ;( I thought everything would be fine.
Kara137 #7
Chapter 1: Nooooooooo!!!!! Why did you do that??? Now I'm crying!!! Why did you make a death ending?? Why?? I hate death ending! All of that hardship for that? To be dead at the end? No! I don't want tooo!!!
I'm just gonna act like the last paragraph doesn't exist. I can't deal with Jongin's death. I CAN'T.
puppyhunnie #8
Chapter 1: you really should change the slightangst tag to superangst tag lol..beautiful story..Jongin's death gave me a shook - didnt see that coming..but it is what life are..thank you for sharing authornim..gonna read your other stories~!~
BehnazYB #9
Chapter 1: wha whattttt?!!! how could you do this to meeee (╥_╥) i was happy and smiling all the time and couldnt wait for them to bring back the child to their home and then happy endingggggg (ToT) myyy poor babyKai, it was so beautiful and sweet Y_Y thanks for sharing
crazyygirl #10
Chapter 1: My heart is shattered....thank you author-nim
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