Sorrow of the night

Description

The deeper she stared into his orbs that felt like unexplored galaxies, the horrified she was by the wounds she found inside his soul, wounds that would never heal, wounds that started to fill up, bringing out the shadow within. 

He was beyond evil.

He was malicious.

It seemed like the devil itself crawled his way out from the burning undergrounds. It was a lot left to imagination and she suddenly wanted to search for even the slightest bit of purity and innocence hidden in his spirit. Haneul didn't know him, nor did she want to learn about the man, but she found him strangely attractive, not good for her own.

Foreword

I made this story 3 years ago for English class and I thought "Why not change some things and post it on AFF?" (I also have it on wattpad).

I actually changed and added a lot more things, because if I didn't, it really would feel like a 14 years old kid's story and upon reading it a few more times, it really feels dull. But, now, my 17 years old self feels the need to detail and all that stuff.

It's short, I'm aware of that, but I think you may enjoy it and if you do so, please tell me in the comments. Maybe, someday, I'll make a sequel or, even better, transform it in a brand new story. 

I don't exactly know why, but I felt like this young pal would fit the best my character.

He ain't called "evil maknae" with no reason.

 

And this random girl would be my OC.. 

So yeah, that's it. Enjoy the story!

Update: you can find this story on Fanfiction too, but with other characters (My Candy Love).

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